my holiday
during this holiday i went to dalian .
i went to there by trian.
i collected some shelfs.(贝壳是这个单词吗?）
and last week i bought some books.they can enrichied my knowledge and brodened my mind.
i think i was very happy.
这篇文章为本人的原创,是按照我们六年级（我本人就是）的讲法写的,写得比较仓促,不过语法什么的,句型应该都满的．
应该是达到了你的要求吧（我们老师也就是让我们这样写的） my holiday
during this holiday i went to dalian .
i went to there by trian.
i collected some shelfs.(贝壳是这个单词吗?）
and last week i bought some books.they can enrichied my knowledge and brodened my mind.
i think i was very happy.
这篇文章为本人的原创,是按照我们六年级（我本人就是）的讲法写的,写得比较仓促,不过语法什么的,句型应该都满的．
应该是达到了你的要求吧（我们老师也就是让我们这样写的）