英语短文改错,急This morning,I went up to the People's Park with Mary to fly a kite.We got a very nice kite,and it was so a lovely day.So we were sure to have a lot of funs.Once the kite went up into the sky.I began to run very fast.I hoped that it will go highte
2019-04-10
英语短文改错,急
This morning,I went up to the People's Park with Mary to fly a kite.We got a very nice kite,and it was so a lovely day.So we were sure to have a lot of funs.Once the kite went up into the sky.I began to run very fast.I hoped that it will go highter and highter.Then suddenly I felt anything wrong.Looking up into the sky.I was disappointing to find that the kite had broken bad.Then Mary comforted me,say,''Now,you know who makes a kite fly high.It's patience and skill.'' Yes,I've learned good lesson today.
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第二行:and it was so a lovely day ,改so为such
So we were sure to have a lot of funs,改为 so we were sure that we would have a lot of fun
第三行:kite went up into the sky,改为 kite started to fly high in the sky
go highter,改为 fly higher
第四行:Then suddenly I felt anything wrong,改Suddenly, I felt something wrong.Then ,I looked up into the sky and the kite had been broken.
第五行:you know who makes a kite fly high.,改为 you know what makes a kite flies high
第六行:skill,改为 skills
learned good ,改为 learned a good
第二行:and it was so a lovely day ,改so为such
So we were sure to have a lot of funs,改为 so we were sure that we would have a lot of fun
第三行:kite went up into the sky,改为 kite started to fly high in the sky
go highter,改为 fly higher
第四行:Then suddenly I felt anything wrong,改Suddenly, I felt something wrong.Then ,I looked up into the sky and the kite had been broken.
第五行:you know who makes a kite fly high.,改为 you know what makes a kite flies high
第六行:skill,改为 skills
learned good ,改为 learned a good