I am Li Yue, an inhabitant in Chaoyang Community.  I’m writing to tell you my opinion of ongoing efforts to create a civilized community.
I am very glad to see the progress made in the community. The newly built high-rises make the community more beautiful and broadened streets make our life much more convenient. Meanwhile, we can’t turn a blind eye to the fact that the behavior of some people need improving. I have noticed that sometimes people don’t behave properly, for example, spitting in public places, picking flowers in public gardens and so on. What’s worse, rubbish and plastic bags are thrown on the ground in the street.
In my opinion, these bad behaviors will make bad impressions on visitors. So I suggest that more efforts should be made to encourage people to form good habits from now on.
Yours Faithfully,
Li Yue

这是一篇建议信，主题是“创建文明社区”，文章的要点基本上都给了出来，包括1，说明写信的目的： 2．简述社区飞速发展的景象以及存在的一些不文明行为； 3．提出建议。考生需要在此基础上进行拓展，在写作的时候要运用合适的连接词把要点串联起来，选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇，也要运用多种句型，让文章更有变化。注意改变文章的样式。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点，使文章成为一个整体。建议信作文的关键在于表达方式的选择和要点的完备，不能有遗漏或者省略。提出建议要切实可行，要符合英语习惯，所以在写作的时候要变换句式，要写得更为亲切直白。

I am Li Yue, an inhabitant in Chaoyang Community.  I’m writing to tell you my opinion of ongoing efforts to create a civilized community.
I am very glad to see the progress made in the community. The newly built high-rises make the community more beautiful and broadened streets make our life much more convenient. Meanwhile, we can’t turn a blind eye to the fact that the behavior of some people need improving. I have noticed that sometimes people don’t behave properly, for example, spitting in public places, picking flowers in public gardens and so on. What’s worse, rubbish and plastic bags are thrown on the ground in the street.
In my opinion, these bad behaviors will make bad impressions on visitors. So I suggest that more efforts should be made to encourage people to form good habits from now on.
Yours Faithfully,
Li Yue

这是一篇建议信，主题是“创建文明社区”，文章的要点基本上都给了出来，包括1，说明写信的目的： 2．简述社区飞速发展的景象以及存在的一些不文明行为； 3．提出建议。考生需要在此基础上进行拓展，在写作的时候要运用合适的连接词把要点串联起来，选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇，也要运用多种句型，让文章更有变化。注意改变文章的样式。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点，使文章成为一个整体。建议信作文的关键在于表达方式的选择和要点的完备，不能有遗漏或者省略。提出建议要切实可行，要符合英语习惯，所以在写作的时候要变换句式，要写得更为亲切直白。