Dear David,
i've learned （from-->on）the internet that you are (eagerly-->eager) to make friends with( a去掉) Chinese to help you study Chinese and (it's-->its) culture.I think it will be (my) pleasure to be (my-->your) friend.I'm Li Hua ,a Senior 3 student in Xianyang.I am good at both English (or-->and) Chinese ,so I am sure I can be of (a去掉） great help to you.We can often write letters ,send (e-mail-->e-mails) ,phone each other or even （chatting--chat） online.In this way ,you will know more about Chinese and my English will get （improve--improved) as well.(What--How) do you like it?
Looking forward to your (early--prompt) reply. Dear David,
i've learned （from-->on）the internet that you are (eagerly-->eager) to make friends with( a去掉) Chinese to help you study Chinese and (it's-->its) culture.I think it will be (my) pleasure to be (my-->your) friend.I'm Li Hua ,a Senior 3 student in Xianyang.I am good at both English (or-->and) Chinese ,so I am sure I can be of (a去掉） great help to you.We can often write letters ,send (e-mail-->e-mails) ,phone each other or even （chatting--chat） online.In this way ,you will know more about Chinese and my English will get （improve--improved) as well.(What--How) do you like it?
Looking forward to your (early--prompt) reply.