2019-05-29
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays there are a lot of films and TV plays that are adapted to popular novels or classical work. Some people think better to read the original while others are against it.
I think reading the original is too much better than watching its film or TV version because I can experience more after reading the original. Just as a famous saying go there are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people's eye. Different people have different feelings about the book or a certain role. But in the film or TV version though we can get a main idea more direct we may miss some wonderful even important plots. And we are easily misled by the actors or actresses so they act according to their understand of the book.
In a word I think reading the original is much better than watching its film or TV version.
解析
第一句:1)to改为from;
第一句:2)work改为works;
第二句:3)在think后面加it;
第三句:4)去掉too;
第四句:5)go改为goes;
第四句:6)eye改为eyes;
第六句:7)a改成the;
第六句:8)direct改为directly;
第七句:9)so改为because;
第七句:10)understand改为understanding或者understandings;
解析
第一句:1)to改为from;
第一句:2)work改为works;
第二句:3)在think后面加it;
第三句:4)去掉too;
第四句:5)go改为goes;
第四句:6)eye改为eyes;
第六句:7)a改成the;
第六句:8)direct改为directly;
第七句:9)so改为because;
第七句:10)understand改为understanding或者understandings;