假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每次错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉.修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.Have you ever been to Wuzhen?
2019-05-29
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每次错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Have you ever been to Wuzhen?It is so beautiful a village that I had already visited it many times.Locating in Jiaxing,Zhejiang province,it has a history of about 6,000 years.Like many small towns in the southern area,which has a lot of small bridges going through clean streams.Local people live in old houses,they are very friendly.During the day,you can walk or sit on a boat to enjoying the natural scenery along the stream.The scene at night is attractively as well.There are all kinds of round and square light.Every time I look at the pictures for which I took,I will remember the water,the bridges and the houses.I love an amazing water country!
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Have you ever been to Wuzhen?It is so beautiful a village that I had already visited it many times.Locating in Jiaxing,Zhejiang province,it has a history of about 6,000 years.Like many small towns in the southern area,which has a lot of small bridges going through clean streams.Local people live in old houses,∧they are very friendly.During the day,you can walk or sit on a boat to enjoying the natural scenery along the stream.The scene at night is attractively as well.There are all kinds of round and square light.Every time I look at the pictures for which I took,I will remember the water,the bridges and the houses.I love an amazing water country!
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1.had改为have 考查动词时态.根据句中already及many times,表示visit虽然发生在过去,但对现在造成了影响,要用一般现在时态.
2.Locating改为Located 考查过去分词.it与locate之间是动宾关系,用过去分词作状语.be located in意为"位于,坐落于".
3.which改为it 考查代词.Like many small towns in the southern area是介词短语,不需要用连词连接,it指代Wuzhen.
4.through改为over/across 考查介词.across表示动作是在某一物体的表面进行的; through表示动作是在三维空间进行的,四面八方都有东西.across和over两者都表示从一侧向另一侧的运动.本文应是在表面通过,用across或over.
5.加and 考查连词.在英语中,两个分句之间用一个连词,此处表示并列关系,用and连接.
6.enjoying改为enjoy 考查动词不定式.此处动词不定式表示目的,作目的状语.
7.attractively改为attractive 考查形容词.be动词后用形容词作表语.
8.light改为lights 考查名词复数.light是可数名词,其前有all kinds of修饰时用复数形式.
9.去掉for 考查定语从句.分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句,先行词pictures在从句中作宾语,take pictures意为"拍照",不需要介词for.
10.an改为the 考查冠词.此处amazing water country指Wuzhen,表示特指用定冠词the.
Have you ever been to Wuzhen?It is so beautiful a village that I had already visited it many times.Locating in Jiaxing,Zhejiang province,it has a history of about 6,000 years.Like many small towns in the southern area,which has a lot of small bridges going through clean streams.Local people live in old houses,∧they are very friendly.During the day,you can walk or sit on a boat to enjoying the natural scenery along the stream.The scene at night is attractively as well.There are all kinds of round and square light.Every time I look at the pictures for which I took,I will remember the water,the bridges and the houses.I love an amazing water country!
详
1.had改为have 考查动词时态.根据句中already及many times,表示visit虽然发生在过去,但对现在造成了影响,要用一般现在时态.
2.Locating改为Located 考查过去分词.it与locate之间是动宾关系,用过去分词作状语.be located in意为"位于,坐落于".
3.which改为it 考查代词.Like many small towns in the southern area是介词短语,不需要用连词连接,it指代Wuzhen.
4.through改为over/across 考查介词.across表示动作是在某一物体的表面进行的; through表示动作是在三维空间进行的,四面八方都有东西.across和over两者都表示从一侧向另一侧的运动.本文应是在表面通过,用across或over.
5.加and 考查连词.在英语中,两个分句之间用一个连词,此处表示并列关系,用and连接.
6.enjoying改为enjoy 考查动词不定式.此处动词不定式表示目的,作目的状语.
7.attractively改为attractive 考查形容词.be动词后用形容词作表语.
8.light改为lights 考查名词复数.light是可数名词,其前有all kinds of修饰时用复数形式.
9.去掉for 考查定语从句.分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句,先行词pictures在从句中作宾语,take pictures意为"拍照",不需要介词for.
10.an改为the 考查冠词.此处amazing water country指Wuzhen,表示特指用定冠词the.