第一节 短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下划一横线（），并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．Lily is a good friend
2019-05-29
第一节 短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线（_____），并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Lily is a good friend of me．She is an exchange student from America，that has been studying in China for one and a half month．In order to make full use of her short stay here，Lily works hardly．Because she had not studied any Chinese before coming，so she has much trouble communicating with the local people．She got up early in the morning to study after class．She is so independent while live far from her family and quite helpful to our Chinese．However busy she is，she would rather take her time help us with our English．
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Lily is a good friend of me．She is an exchange student from America，that has been studying in China for one and a half month．In order to make full use of her short stay here，Lily works hardly．Because she had not studied any Chinese before coming，so she has much trouble communicating with the local people．She gotup early in the morning to study after class．She is so independent while live far from her family and quite helpful to our Chinese．However busy she is，she would rather take her time∧help us with our English．
详
1．me改为mine；考查名词性物主代词，介词of后跟名词性物主代词mine，相当于my friends．
2．that改为who；考查关系代词，在这个定语从句中，关系代词指人在从句中作主语，故用关系代词who．
3．month改为months；考查名词单复数，one and a half 意为"一个半"，后面跟名词的复数形式．
4．hardly改为hard；考查副词，work hard是固定搭配，意为"努力学习"，hard是副词，修饰动词work；hardly也是副词，意为"几乎不"．
5．去掉so；考查连词，because不能与so连用．
6．got改为gets；考查动词的时态，此处陈述一个客观事实，用一般现在时，主语为she，故动词用第三人称单数形式．
7．after改为before；考查介词，分析句意为"她早晨起得很早，上课之前就开始学习"，故用before表示"在…之前"．
8．live改为living；考查非谓语动词，这里用living，是一种省略"主语+be"的结构，完整形式为while she is living far…
9．our改为us；考查人称代词，此处指代是"我们中国人"而不是"我们的中国人"，us 与Chinese是同位语，在句中做宾语．
10．help前面加to；考查动词不定式，此处用不定式短语作目的状语．
Lily is a good friend of me．She is an exchange student from America，that has been studying in China for one and a half month．In order to make full use of her short stay here，Lily works hardly．Because she had not studied any Chinese before coming，so she has much trouble communicating with the local people．She gotup early in the morning to study after class．She is so independent while live far from her family and quite helpful to our Chinese．However busy she is，she would rather take her time∧help us with our English．
详
1．me改为mine；考查名词性物主代词，介词of后跟名词性物主代词mine，相当于my friends．
2．that改为who；考查关系代词，在这个定语从句中，关系代词指人在从句中作主语，故用关系代词who．
3．month改为months；考查名词单复数，one and a half 意为"一个半"，后面跟名词的复数形式．
4．hardly改为hard；考查副词，work hard是固定搭配，意为"努力学习"，hard是副词，修饰动词work；hardly也是副词，意为"几乎不"．
5．去掉so；考查连词，because不能与so连用．
6．got改为gets；考查动词的时态，此处陈述一个客观事实，用一般现在时，主语为she，故动词用第三人称单数形式．
7．after改为before；考查介词，分析句意为"她早晨起得很早，上课之前就开始学习"，故用before表示"在…之前"．
8．live改为living；考查非谓语动词，这里用living，是一种省略"主语+be"的结构，完整形式为while she is living far…
9．our改为us；考查人称代词，此处指代是"我们中国人"而不是"我们的中国人"，us 与Chinese是同位语，在句中做宾语．
10．help前面加to；考查动词不定式，此处用不定式短语作目的状语．