求老师解答：假定英语课上老师要求假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改一下你同桌写的作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）,并在其下面写出该加的词.删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉.修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词.2. 只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分. One evening ther

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求老师解答：假定英语课上老师要求

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改一下你同桌写的作文.文中共有10处语言错
误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）,并在其下面写出该加的词.删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉.修改：在错的词下划一横线,
并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词.2. 只允许修改10处,多者
（从第11处起）不计分.

One evening there had a big dance at the hotel in our town. One of the guest at the dance was a man of
about forty who thought he was very handsome that every girl who saw him would fall in love with him. In
the beginning of one of the dances, he saw a pretty young woman standing besides an older lady at the edge
of the dance-floor. He went up to the girl and asked her to dance. She had seen him to dance before, so she
knew he was good dancer, and she too liked dancing,so she received. After dancing the man asked her, "Do
you tell your mother everything which you do?" She answered sweetly, "She does not mind what I do it. But
my husband always wants to know."
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第一句：1.had-was
第二句：2.guest-guests 3.very-so
第三句：4.In-At 5.besides-beside
第五句：6.去掉to 7.he was后加a 8.received-accepted
第六句：9.which-that
第七句：10.去掉it