第一节 短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除和修改增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分． China is facing seriously&nb
2019-05-29
第一节 短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除和修改
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
China is facing seriously traffic problems．Too much cars travel on the roads．This heavy traffic causes delays and a plenty of air pollution．Although many cities in China have traffic problems，some of the worse are in Beijing．One of the reason why there is so much traffic is what only a small number of people use public transportation．
I think one way solve the traffic problems was to make people use the public transportation system．For example，they can take buses instead of drive cars．Meanwhile，the government should make them more reliable and convenient to travel by bus．
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China is facing seriously traffic problems．Too much cars travel on the roads．This heavy traffic causes delays and a plenty of air pollution．Although many cities in China have traffic problems，some of the worse are in Beijing．One of the reason why there is so much traffic is what only a small number of people use public transportation．
I think one way∧solve the traffic problems was to make people use the public transportation system．For example，they can take buses instead of drive cars．Meanwhile，the government should make them more reliable and convenient to travel by bus．
详
1．seriously改为serious；考查形容词，此处用形容词作定语修饰名词短语traffic problems．
2．much改为many；考查近义词辨析，much修饰不可数名词，many修饰可数名词复数形式，故此处用many．
3．去掉a；考查固定短语，没有a plenty of这种用法，只有plenty of，可以修饰可数名词或不可数名词．
4．worse改为worst；考查形容词的最高级，分析句意为"在中国很多城市都存在交通问题，其中最严重的是在北京"，故用最高级形式worst．
5．reason改为reasons；考查名词，one of 后面跟可数名词的复数形式．
6．what改为that；考查表语从句，从句only a small number of people use public transportation是一个完整的句子，不缺少成分，故用that连接表语从句．what在从句中要做某一成分．
7．solve前面加to；考查动词不定式，此处用不定式短语作后置定语修饰way．
8．was改为is；考查动词的时态，本文用一般现在时陈述一个客观现象，故动词用一般现在时is．
9．drive改为driving；考查非谓语动词，介词of后面要跟动名词形式．
10．them改为it；考查人称代词，此处人称代词指代travel by bus这件事，故用it．
China is facing seriously traffic problems．Too much cars travel on the roads．This heavy traffic causes delays and a plenty of air pollution．Although many cities in China have traffic problems，some of the worse are in Beijing．One of the reason why there is so much traffic is what only a small number of people use public transportation．
I think one way∧solve the traffic problems was to make people use the public transportation system．For example，they can take buses instead of drive cars．Meanwhile，the government should make them more reliable and convenient to travel by bus．
详
1．seriously改为serious；考查形容词，此处用形容词作定语修饰名词短语traffic problems．
2．much改为many；考查近义词辨析，much修饰不可数名词，many修饰可数名词复数形式，故此处用many．
3．去掉a；考查固定短语，没有a plenty of这种用法，只有plenty of，可以修饰可数名词或不可数名词．
4．worse改为worst；考查形容词的最高级，分析句意为"在中国很多城市都存在交通问题，其中最严重的是在北京"，故用最高级形式worst．
5．reason改为reasons；考查名词，one of 后面跟可数名词的复数形式．
6．what改为that；考查表语从句，从句only a small number of people use public transportation是一个完整的句子，不缺少成分，故用that连接表语从句．what在从句中要做某一成分．
7．solve前面加to；考查动词不定式，此处用不定式短语作后置定语修饰way．
8．was改为is；考查动词的时态，本文用一般现在时陈述一个客观现象，故动词用一般现在时is．
9．drive改为driving；考查非谓语动词，介词of后面要跟动名词形式．
10．them改为it；考查人称代词，此处人称代词指代travel by bus这件事，故用it．