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 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文。请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改。   增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。   删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。   修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。   注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;      &

2019-05-29

 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文。请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改。

  增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。

  删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

  修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

  注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

        2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

  It has been years after I said goodbye to my childhoodbut an amusing event will never be forgotten.

  My parents were too much busy to look after me wellso my grandparents took care of me before I started schoo1.One

day Grandma was about to cook then she found there wasn’t enough salt.So 1 was sent to the shop in our neighboring

village.I ran along the road happilyleave the flowers waving in the wind and the dragonflies flying around me.But I had no

time to look at it.

  I got what I asked the moment the money changed hands.Thinking that Grandma was waitingI made the best of my leg

 on the way backAs I was flying homeI tripped over a rock on a road.

  “Alas!Where is my bag of salt?”was the first thought that flashed in my mind“I hope it was not torn!”

  But the bag was in fact about two or three metres awaywidely open.The salt had gone everywhere!

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    It has been years I said goodbye to my childhoodbut an amusing event will never be forgotten.

  My parents were too busy to look after me wellso my grandparents took care of me before I started school.One day Grandma was about to cookshe found there wasn’t enough salt.So 1 was sent to the shop in our neighboring village.I ran along the road happilythe    flowers waving in the wind and the dragonflies flying around me.But I had no time to look at.

    I got what I askedthe moment the money changed hands.Thinking that Grandma was waitingI made the best of my.on the way back.As 1 was flying homeI tripped  over a rock on a road.

    “Alas! Where is my bag of salt?”was the first thoughtflashed in my mind“I hope it not torn!”

       But the bag was in fact about two or three metres away.open.The salt had gone everywhere!

 



    It has been years I said goodbye to my childhoodbut an amusing event will never be forgotten.

  My parents were too busy to look after me wellso my grandparents took care of me before I started school.One day Grandma was about to cookshe found there wasn’t enough salt.So 1 was sent to the shop in our neighboring village.I ran along the road happilythe    flowers waving in the wind and the dragonflies flying around me.But I had no time to look at.

    I got what I askedthe moment the money changed hands.Thinking that Grandma was waitingI made the best of my.on the way back.As 1 was flying homeI tripped  over a rock on a road.

    “Alas! Where is my bag of salt?”was the first thoughtflashed in my mind“I hope it not torn!”

       But the bag was in fact about two or three metres away.open.The salt had gone everywhere!

 


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