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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。没出错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：    1. 没出错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 I remember

2019-05-29

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。没出错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：    1. 没出错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I remember a first time when I saw my little sister Shanshan. I was eight years old. Because my arms looked weak my mother trusted that I can hold the baby. Then I took Shanshan on my arms and I knew how much I very loved her. My mother had a full-time hob so we had a person which was in charge of housekeeping and taking care of us. I didn’t want anyone else take care of my sister. Therefore I feed her gave her a bath and changed her clothes. When she was cry I held her.

Now Shanshan has grown up and is tall than I am but I still treat her as my little sister.

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I remember a first time when I saw my little sister Shanshan. I was eight years old.

             the

Because my arms looked weak my mother trusted that I can hold the baby. Then I took

Although/Though                               could

Shanshan on my arms and I knew how much I very loved her. My mother had a full-time job

        in

so we had a person which was in charge of housekeeping and taking care of us. I didn’t want

                who/that

anyone else ∧ take care of my sister. Therefore I feed her gave her a bath and changed her

           to                             fed

clothes. When she was cry I held her.

               crying

Now Shanshan has grown up and is tall than I am but I still treat her as my little sister.

                                 taller



I remember a first time when I saw my little sister Shanshan. I was eight years old.

             the

Because my arms looked weak my mother trusted that I can hold the baby. Then I took

Although/Though                               could

Shanshan on my arms and I knew how much I very loved her. My mother had a full-time job

        in

so we had a person which was in charge of housekeeping and taking care of us. I didn’t want

                who/that

anyone else ∧ take care of my sister. Therefore I feed her gave her a bath and changed her

           to                             fed

clothes. When she was cry I held her.

               crying

Now Shanshan has grown up and is tall than I am but I still treat her as my little sister.

                                 taller


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