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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（ ^  ），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除；把多余的词 用斜线（ \  ）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；       2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处

2019-05-29

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（ ^  ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除；把多余的词 用斜线（ \  ）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

      2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear editor

I am writing to you to talk about the heavy traffic. Nowadays people in many big cities are complaining the heavy traffic. It has serious influenced people’s daily life and economic development. To solve the problem I’d like to put forward some advices.

For one thing more streets and roads should be built. In this way we can speed up the flow of buses and cars. For other the number of bikes and cars can be limited that can decrease the traffic flow. But the most important thing is what the number of private cars should be put under the control. Meanwhile buses should have its own special routes which cannot be using by other vehicles. Therefore underground train and city train should be developed quickly.

I do hope my suggestions will be taken.

Yours

Li Hua

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Dear editor

I am writing to you to talk about the heavy traffic. Nowadays people in many big cities are complaining ^ the heavy traffic. It has serious influenced people’s daily life

              about                seriously

and economic development. To solve the problem I’d like to put forward some advices.

                                                                advice

For one thing more streets and roads should be built. In this way we can speed up the flow of buses and cars. For other the number of bikes and cars can be limited

                         another

that can decrease the traffic flow. But the most important thing is what the number of

which                                                that

private cars should be put under the control. Meanwhile buses should have its own

                                                             their

special routes which cannot be using by other vehicles. Therefore underground train and

                         used                Besides/Moreover

city train should be developed quickly.

I do hope my suggestions will be taken.

Yours

Li Hua

Dear editor

I am writing to you to talk about the heavy traffic. Nowadays people in many big cities are complaining ^ the heavy traffic. It has serious influenced people’s daily life

              about                seriously

and economic development. To solve the problem I’d like to put forward some advices.

                                                                advice

For one thing more streets and roads should be built. In this way we can speed up the flow of buses and cars. For other the number of bikes and cars can be limited

                         another

that can decrease the traffic flow. But the most important thing is what the number of

which                                                that

private cars should be put under the control. Meanwhile buses should have its own

                                                             their

special routes which cannot be using by other vehicles. Therefore underground train and

                         used                Besides/Moreover

city train should be developed quickly.

I do hope my suggestions will be taken.

Yours

Li Hua
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