这篇托福作文能得多少分?题 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication,such as letters,email,or telephone calls.Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.正文Different people
2019-04-18
这篇托福作文能得多少分?
题 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication,such as letters,email,or telephone calls.Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
正文
Different people chose different ways of communication.Some perfer to communicate by facing that person while others rather writing letters,emailing or calling that person.Even though both of them have their own advantages,we cannot say that face-to-face communication is better than other types.There are three reasons why face-to-face communication is not the best way to communiacte with others.
First of all,people are less likely to control their emotions well when they communicate with others face to face.When some people disguss issue by faceing others they tend to force each other to agree on their own opinions.And as a result,problems are solved slowly and relashionships are ruined sometimes.In contrast,communicate by writing or calling makes people stay calm and gives them more time to think clearly.
Secondly,face-to-face communication is less effective due to the lack of proper organization.That is why most people always perfer to write down things they want to say before a speech or a presentation.Almost nobody is able to preform a great speech without writing a rough copy of the speech.Writing makes communication effective and organizable.
Last but not least,there are things that are hard to tell to others directly.A good example would be,if you want to break up with your girlfriend but you cannot bear her crying,then the best way to communicate with her is to call her.Communicate by letters,emails,or calls will make conflicts be solved much easier.
As a conclusion,one cannot say face-to-face communication is better than any other types of communication because of these three reasons.
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嗯,单看这篇文章,楼主大概能拿个22左右的分数吧
总体结构是不错的,每个论点也比较清晰,这是优点.
缺点主要是：
1.拼写及用词.拼写错误和用词失误有点太多了,建议楼主不管打字多急时间多紧,最后还是要抽1分钟快速浏览一遍自己的文章,把能改的都改了,ETS抠stupid mistake据说还是比较紧的.
2.论点有了,可是论据不足或者阐述的不够到位.有些话逻辑跳跃太厉害,不足以支持论点.其中第二段最为明显.楼主仔细斟酌一下.
3.第一段太累赘而且模板痕迹太明显,再修改一下自己的模板吧,不要给ETS机会判你雷同
以上修改建议希望能帮助到楼主.
嗯,单看这篇文章,楼主大概能拿个22左右的分数吧
总体结构是不错的,每个论点也比较清晰,这是优点.
缺点主要是：
1.拼写及用词.拼写错误和用词失误有点太多了,建议楼主不管打字多急时间多紧,最后还是要抽1分钟快速浏览一遍自己的文章,把能改的都改了,ETS抠stupid mistake据说还是比较紧的.
2.论点有了,可是论据不足或者阐述的不够到位.有些话逻辑跳跃太厉害,不足以支持论点.其中第二段最为明显.楼主仔细斟酌一下.
3.第一段太累赘而且模板痕迹太明显,再修改一下自己的模板吧,不要给ETS机会判你雷同
以上修改建议希望能帮助到楼主.