假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词： 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．I'm more than happy to
2019-05-29
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I'm more than happy to hear you．You told me you were having trouble leam Chinese and wanted some advices from me．
Firstly，why not to learn to sing Chinese songs？It's a good way to learn Chinese and can make you feel relaxing．Secondly，you can make some Chinese friends．Although you get along well with it，they will help you to learn Chinese．Beside，it will be helpful if you watched some Chinese TV programmes and read some Chinese novels．Finally，joining a club is also the good way to learn Chinese．In this way，you will get more chances to practice Chinese．
I hope the suggestions will be useful．
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I'm more than happy to hear∧you．You told me you were having trouble leam Chinese and wanted some advices from me．
Firstly，why not to learn to sing Chinese songs？It's a good way to learn Chinese and can make you feel relaxing．Secondly，you can make some Chinese friends．Although you get along well with it，they will help you to learn Chinese．Beside，it will be helpful if you watched some Chinese TV programmes and read some Chinese novels．Finally，joining a club is also the good way to learn Chinese．In this way，you will get more chances to practice Chinese．
I hope the suggestions will be useful．
详
1．在hear 后加from；考查固定短语，hear from是固定搭配，意为"收到…的来信"．hear意为"听到"，结合上下文此处应该用hear from．
2．learn改为learning；考查非谓语动词，have trouble （in） doing sth．是固定搭配，意思是：做某事有困难．．
3．advices改为advice；考查名词，advice是不可数名词，没有复数形式．
4．去掉to；考查固定句式，Why not do sth．是固定句型，意思是：为什么不…呢．故把to 去掉．
5．relaxing改为relaxed；考查分词作形容词，现在分词作形容词表示事物的性质，过去分词作形容词说明人的感受，句中修饰的是you，故用过去分词作形容词．
6．Although改为If；考查连词，根据句子前后的意思可知此处是一个条件状语从句，所以要用If．
7．it改为them；考查人称代词的数，由于上一句提到的是Chinese friends，可知代词要用复数形式，故用them．
8．Beside改为Besides；考查形近单词辨析，Beside是介词，意思是：在…旁边；besides是副词或介词，意思是：除此以外．联系上下文，可知此处应该用besides．
9．watched改为watch；考查动词的时态，这是一个条件状语从句，主句用了一般将来时，从句要用一般现在时．故用watch．
10．the改为a；考查冠词，此处所说的是一种方法，故用不定冠词a表示泛指．
I'm more than happy to hear∧you．You told me you were having trouble leam Chinese and wanted some advices from me．
Firstly，why not to learn to sing Chinese songs？It's a good way to learn Chinese and can make you feel relaxing．Secondly，you can make some Chinese friends．Although you get along well with it，they will help you to learn Chinese．Beside，it will be helpful if you watched some Chinese TV programmes and read some Chinese novels．Finally，joining a club is also the good way to learn Chinese．In this way，you will get more chances to practice Chinese．
I hope the suggestions will be useful．
详
1．在hear 后加from；考查固定短语，hear from是固定搭配，意为"收到…的来信"．hear意为"听到"，结合上下文此处应该用hear from．
2．learn改为learning；考查非谓语动词，have trouble （in） doing sth．是固定搭配，意思是：做某事有困难．．
3．advices改为advice；考查名词，advice是不可数名词，没有复数形式．
4．去掉to；考查固定句式，Why not do sth．是固定句型，意思是：为什么不…呢．故把to 去掉．
5．relaxing改为relaxed；考查分词作形容词，现在分词作形容词表示事物的性质，过去分词作形容词说明人的感受，句中修饰的是you，故用过去分词作形容词．
6．Although改为If；考查连词，根据句子前后的意思可知此处是一个条件状语从句，所以要用If．
7．it改为them；考查人称代词的数，由于上一句提到的是Chinese friends，可知代词要用复数形式，故用them．
8．Beside改为Besides；考查形近单词辨析，Beside是介词，意思是：在…旁边；besides是副词或介词，意思是：除此以外．联系上下文，可知此处应该用besides．
9．watched改为watch；考查动词的时态，这是一个条件状语从句，主句用了一般将来时，从句要用一般现在时．故用watch．
10．the改为a；考查冠词，此处所说的是一种方法，故用不定冠词a表示泛指．