2019-05-29
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线\划掉．
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分
A person who we should learn from doesn't need to be rich and famous．It could be the person we live with him．For me，it's my father．
I still remember the days when I was child．Although he had plenty of works to do，but he still stayed with me and played children's games with me．With time go by，I'm in Senior 3now．It is me who have no time to stay with him now!However，he is still behind me and try his best to make a better life for our family．How handsome and selflessly he is!I am really very grateful for him．
In my mind，he is not only my father，but also a hero living with me!
A person who we should learn from doesn't need to be rich and famous．It could be the person we live with him．For me，it's my father．
I still remember the days when I was∧child．Although he had plenty of works to do，but he still stayed with me and played children's games with me．With time go by，I'm in Senior 3now．It is me who have no time to stay with him now!However，he is still behind me and try his best to make a better life for our family．How handsome and selflessly he is!I am really very grateful for him．
In my mind，he is not only my father，but also a hero living with me!
详
1．and改为or；考查连词，在并列结构中，and用于肯定句，or用于否定句，分析该句可知这是一个否定句，应该用or．
2．去掉him；考查句子结构，分析句子可知，we live with him是一个定语从句，先行词the person是live with的宾语，所以后面不用再跟宾语，故把him去掉．
3．child前面加a；考查冠词，child是可数名词的单数形式，所以前面要加a泛指"一个"．
4．works改为work；考查名词，work意为"工作"，是不可数名词，没有复数形式，故把works改为work．
5．去掉but；考查连词，although引导让步状语从句时不能与but连用，但可以与yet/still连用，该句中有了still，所以把but去掉．
6．go改为going；考查分词作状语，这里是"介词+分词短语"作状语，time与动词go存在逻辑上的主谓关系，故用现在分词形式作状语．
7．me改为I；考查人称代词，分析句子结构可知，这里的人称代词在意义上是后面的从句中的主语，故用主格形式 I．
8．try改为tries；考查动词的时态，这里and连接两个并列成分，前后时态要保持一致，用一般现在时，又主语是he，故try要用第三人称单数形式tries．
9．selflessly改为selfless；考查形容词，分析句子结构可知，此处要用形容词形式作系动词is的表语．
10．for改为to；考查固定搭配，be greatful to 是固定短语，意为"对某人很感激
A person who we should learn from doesn't need to be rich and famous．It could be the person we live with him．For me，it's my father．
I still remember the days when I was∧child．Although he had plenty of works to do，but he still stayed with me and played children's games with me．With time go by，I'm in Senior 3now．It is me who have no time to stay with him now!However，he is still behind me and try his best to make a better life for our family．How handsome and selflessly he is!I am really very grateful for him．
In my mind，he is not only my father，but also a hero living with me!
详
1．and改为or；考查连词，在并列结构中，and用于肯定句，or用于否定句，分析该句可知这是一个否定句，应该用or．
2．去掉him；考查句子结构，分析句子可知，we live with him是一个定语从句，先行词the person是live with的宾语，所以后面不用再跟宾语，故把him去掉．
3．child前面加a；考查冠词，child是可数名词的单数形式，所以前面要加a泛指"一个"．
4．works改为work；考查名词，work意为"工作"，是不可数名词，没有复数形式，故把works改为work．
5．去掉but；考查连词，although引导让步状语从句时不能与but连用，但可以与yet/still连用，该句中有了still，所以把but去掉．
6．go改为going；考查分词作状语，这里是"介词+分词短语"作状语，time与动词go存在逻辑上的主谓关系，故用现在分词形式作状语．
7．me改为I；考查人称代词，分析句子结构可知，这里的人称代词在意义上是后面的从句中的主语，故用主格形式 I．
8．try改为tries；考查动词的时态，这里and连接两个并列成分，前后时态要保持一致，用一般现在时，又主语是he，故try要用第三人称单数形式tries．
9．selflessly改为selfless；考查形容词，分析句子结构可知，此处要用形容词形式作系动词is的表语．
10．for改为to；考查固定搭配，be greatful to 是固定短语，意为"对某人很感激