帮我改作文,没找到一处错误加5财富,200封顶With the development of economy,Chinese family's life has a huge changes .People's life become more and more happiness.Before then,our country was poor.So people couldn't has enough food.they has a little food to sustain their life
2019-05-29
帮我改作文,没找到一处错误加5财富,200封顶
With the development of economy,Chinese family's life has a huge changes .People's life become more and more happiness.
Before then,our country was poor.So people couldn't has enough food.they has a little food to sustain their life .People in the past go to bed early ,because they has no any entertainment .In the past,they work on the field all the day.It's hardly and
triedly job,but they has no choice.
However ,recent people's life has a huge changes.Now people can eat everything what they want.
Peeople not only has enough food to eat ,but also has lost of delicious food .As the
TV and computer invented,people's life become more and more entertainment.They can watch TV at home,or play computer with their frients.People's life is colorful in today.
In general ,people's life is comfortable and colorful.I believe that our life will have great changes in the future because the development of our country' economy.
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这段所有动词全改成过去时 倒数第二句话hardly前面加a
第三段第一句话changes改成change前面是单数,后面就要跟前面一致,不要前面单数后面复数
people's life become more and more entertainment这句话跟上面说的一样,become more and more后面接形容词或副词 最后一句话in today 把in去掉
最后一段第二句话our lives 最后一句话because the development of our country' economy在economy前面加个is
总体来看主要问题是单复数不一致,就是同一句话前面用单数而后面用复数,整篇文章也是,有时用复数有时用单数,语态不对,提到过去的时候全都应该用过去式,还有就是你不能用中文的思路去写英语作文,英语作文对语句的要求很多,你这里最常范的错误就是主谓结构不会应用,也就是动词后面接的应该是副词而不是名词
嗯.7年没用过英语了,说的不对和不全的地方请见谅哈
第一段地二句话changes改成change 第三句话,你是想说人们的生活变得越来越快乐become是动词,后面不能跟名词所以改成have more and more happiness 或者become happier and happier第二段第二句话could后面应该加动词原形 has改成have 第三句话这句话应该用过去时 has改成had 最后那个life改成复数lives 下句话用倒装并且是过去时People went to bed early in the past
这段所有动词全改成过去时 倒数第二句话hardly前面加a
第三段第一句话changes改成change前面是单数,后面就要跟前面一致,不要前面单数后面复数
people's life become more and more entertainment这句话跟上面说的一样,become more and more后面接形容词或副词 最后一句话in today 把in去掉
最后一段第二句话our lives 最后一句话because the development of our country' economy在economy前面加个is
总体来看主要问题是单复数不一致,就是同一句话前面用单数而后面用复数,整篇文章也是,有时用复数有时用单数,语态不对,提到过去的时候全都应该用过去式,还有就是你不能用中文的思路去写英语作文,英语作文对语句的要求很多,你这里最常范的错误就是主谓结构不会应用,也就是动词后面接的应该是副词而不是名词
嗯.7年没用过英语了,说的不对和不全的地方请见谅哈