假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 After schoo

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假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

After school as usual I went back home. On the bus I find a woman with a cute baby standing besides me and having difficulty holding on to the grab pole. In spite my own exhaustion I rose from my seat and gave them away without hesitation to her and the baby. She thanked me several times sincerely that made me feel extremely proud. I was realized my little favor could real make a difference to a person who was badly in need of it. Arrived home I almost forgot my tiredness. I was lost in happinesses because I did a little for a stranger and I gained a lot.

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home I almost forgot my tiredness. I was lost in happinesses because I did a little for a

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