2019-05-29
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (Λ) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 ( ＼ ) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1 ．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2 ．只允许修改 10 处，多者 ( 从第 11 处起 ) 不计分。
Being responsible is actually not that difficult. I used to think that it is hard to grow up into a responsible member of the society. An incident happening in a rainy Sunday afternoon changed my attitude. I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light while a girl was knocked down by passing car which drove off quickly. A man immediately gave her first aid and I had joined in without hesitation. Soon many help was given to the girl. Because we sent her to the nearest hospitals in time she was able to receive properly treatment. Not badly injured I expressed gratitude to those giving help. Compared with the escaping driver I was proud of what I did.
Being responsible is actually not that difficult. I used to think that it is hard to grow up into a
was
responsible member of the society. An incident happening in a rainy Sunday afternoon changed
on
my attitude. I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light while a girl was
when
knocked down by ∧passing car which drove off quickly. A man immediately gave her first aid
a
and I had joined in without hesitation. Soon many help was given to the girl. Because we
much
sent her to the nearest hospitals in time she was able to receive properly treatment. Not badly
hospital properinjured I expressed gratitude to those giving help. Compared with the escaping driver I was
she escaped
proud of what I did.
Being responsible is actually not that difficult. I used to think that it is hard to grow up into a
was
responsible member of the society. An incident happening in a rainy Sunday afternoon changed
on
my attitude. I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light while a girl was
when
knocked down by ∧passing car which drove off quickly. A man immediately gave her first aid
a
and I had joined in without hesitation. Soon many help was given to the girl. Because we
much
sent her to the nearest hospitals in time she was able to receive properly treatment. Not badly
hospital properinjured I expressed gratitude to those giving help. Compared with the escaping driver I was
she escaped
proud of what I did.