假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．Everyone has a&
2019-05-29
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Everyone has a dream．We are on the way to achieve it whether the way is smooth or tough．As Senior 3student，I dream to be admitted to a key university about language study．In the past three year，I have done everything I can to equip myself with that I have learned from my teachers．Not only had I enjoyed the pleasure of study but also I have got closer to my dream．At times anxiety and pressure did discourage from me and with the encouragement of my teachers and classmates，I think I will make it．I bet that there has still a long way to go to achieve my dream．Whatever challenging it is，I will make it come truly．As the proverb says，"Where there's a will，there's a way．"
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Everyone has a dream．We are on the way to achieve it whether the way is smooth or tough．As∧Senior 3student，I dream to be admitted to a key university about language study．In the past three year，I have done everything I can to equip myself with that I have learned from my teachers．Not only had I enjoyed the pleasure of study but also I have got closer to my dream．At times anxiety and pressure did discourage from me and with the encouragement of my teachers and classmates，I think I will make it．I bet that there has still a long way to go to achieve my dream．Whatever challenging it is，I will make it come truly．As the proverb says，"Where there's a will，there's a way．"
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1．achieve改为achieving；动名词错误．句中on the way to后接名词或动名词．
2．加a；冠词错误．句意表达的是泛指一位高三的学生，要用不定冠词来限定．
3．year改为years；名词错误．句中有基数词three修饰，可数名词year要用复数形式．
4．that改为what；连词错误．句中I have learned from my teachers作介词with的宾语，是应该宾语从句；从句learned缺少宾语，且句意表达的是事情，要用what来连接．
5．had改为have；时态错误．句意表达的是现在完成时态．
6．from去掉；动词搭配错误．句中discourage是及物动词，不需要加介词．
7．and改为but；连词错误．句意表达的是转折，不是并列．
8．has改为is；句型结构错误．题干是there be结构，表示存在有，不能与表示所有关系的has混用．
9．Whatever改为However；连词错误．句中challenging是形容词，要用however来连接．
10．truly改为true；形容词错误．句中true作系动词come的表语，要用形容词形式．
Everyone has a dream．We are on the way to achieve it whether the way is smooth or tough．As∧Senior 3student，I dream to be admitted to a key university about language study．In the past three year，I have done everything I can to equip myself with that I have learned from my teachers．Not only had I enjoyed the pleasure of study but also I have got closer to my dream．At times anxiety and pressure did discourage from me and with the encouragement of my teachers and classmates，I think I will make it．I bet that there has still a long way to go to achieve my dream．Whatever challenging it is，I will make it come truly．As the proverb says，"Where there's a will，there's a way．"
详
1．achieve改为achieving；动名词错误．句中on the way to后接名词或动名词．
2．加a；冠词错误．句意表达的是泛指一位高三的学生，要用不定冠词来限定．
3．year改为years；名词错误．句中有基数词three修饰，可数名词year要用复数形式．
4．that改为what；连词错误．句中I have learned from my teachers作介词with的宾语，是应该宾语从句；从句learned缺少宾语，且句意表达的是事情，要用what来连接．
5．had改为have；时态错误．句意表达的是现在完成时态．
6．from去掉；动词搭配错误．句中discourage是及物动词，不需要加介词．
7．and改为but；连词错误．句意表达的是转折，不是并列．
8．has改为is；句型结构错误．题干是there be结构，表示存在有，不能与表示所有关系的has混用．
9．Whatever改为However；连词错误．句中challenging是形容词，要用however来连接．
10．truly改为true；形容词错误．句中true作系动词come的表语，要用形容词形式．