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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有 10 处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1.  每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。   &nbs

2019-05-29

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有 10 处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.  每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。

    Last month I was told we would have our first military training. At first I thought it will be hard to spend a whole week stayed away from school and home. The sunshine would be very strongly during these days or we could easily get sunburnt. Later when I was in the camp I found it was a lot fun. The training was hard for you all. But my classmates and I were treated very kindly by all the soldier. The food in the camp look simple but tasted good. Now you never know how happy days we had in the camp. I think the experience has been made us stronger!

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Last month I was told we would have our first military training. At first I thought it will be

                                                                        would

hard to spend a whole week stayed away from school and home. The sunshine would be very

                      staying                                                

strongly during these days or we could easily get sunburnt. Later when I was in the camp I found 

strong                 and/so 

it was a lot ∧ fun. The training was hard for you all. But my classmates and I were treated very

         of                          us                                      

kindly by all the soldier. The food in the camp look simple but tasted good. Now you never know

             soldiers                  looked                                    



Last month I was told we would have our first military training. At first I thought it will be

                                                                        would

hard to spend a whole week stayed away from school and home. The sunshine would be very

                      staying                                                

strongly during these days or we could easily get sunburnt. Later when I was in the camp I found 

strong                 and/so 

it was a lot ∧ fun. The training was hard for you all. But my classmates and I were treated very

         of                          us                                      

kindly by all the soldier. The food in the camp look simple but tasted good. Now you never know

             soldiers                  looked                                    


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