2019-05-29
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Most of us are fond in traveling because traveling can bring us a lot of benefits. By traveling they can enjoy the beautiful scenery in different place. We will visit much famous places and taste different delicious foods. Traveling abroad is especially great experience for those who does not have the opportunity to be away from their homeland. We will meet different people and see strangely things when we traveled. It will be not only help us know about customs of other people but also will help us gain knowledge of the places we visit. In this way we can understand what differently other people live and arouse（唤起） our deep love for our motherland.
Most of us are fond in traveling because traveling can bring us a lot of benefits. By
of
traveling they
we
can enjoy the beautiful scenery in different place. We will visit much famous places and taste different places many
delicious foods. Traveling abroad is ∧ especially great experience for those who does not have the an
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opportunity to be away from their homeland. We will meet different people and see strangely things
strange
when we traveled. It will be not only help us know about customs of other people
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but also will help us
gain knowledge of the places we visit. In this way we can understand what differently other people live how
and arouse our deep love for our motherland.
Most of us are fond in traveling because traveling can bring us a lot of benefits. By
of
traveling they
we
can enjoy the beautiful scenery in different place. We will visit much famous places and taste different places many
delicious foods. Traveling abroad is ∧ especially great experience for those who does not have the an
do
opportunity to be away from their homeland. We will meet different people and see strangely things
strange
when we traveled. It will be not only help us know about customs of other people
travel 去掉be
but also will help us
gain knowledge of the places we visit. In this way we can understand what differently other people live how
and arouse our deep love for our motherland.