假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词; 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 Two years ago my husband buy m

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Two years ago my husband buy me a bicycle. If you live in a town it is often fast than a car and you don’t have to worry parking. You can leave them in any place you like. As it has a seat at the back or a basket at the front it’s convenient for me to take my little daughter to school and go shopping. I use it most in summer while the weather is warm and dry. It can be unpleasant in winter though when the weather is cold and rain. It can also be dangerous. You should be careful of on a bicycle. Accidents are not the only problem. One day I went shop and came back to find my front wheel gone. Now I have three strong lock.

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and you don’t have to worry ∧ parking. You can leave them in any place you like. As it has a

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seat at the back or a basket at the front it’s convenient for me to take my little daughter to school

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and go shopping. I use it most in summer while the weather is warm and dry. It can be unpleasant

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in winter though when the weather is cold and rain. It can also be dangerous. You should be

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careful of on a bicycle of course. Accidents are not the only problem. One day I went shop and

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came back to find my front wheel gone. Now I have three strong lock.

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