2019-05-29
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Tom
I’m glad to hear that you are considering make up with Peter. If I am you I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him.
As far as I know it Peter is always in poor health so he can take more exercises by riding a bike to build up his body. In the meanwhile you can often go outing by bike together which is helpfully in rebuilding your friendship. Beside taking a bike is an environmentally-friendly means of transport. It’s convenient him to get around as well.
Apart from giving him the gift you can also adopt other means such as traveling seeing a movie having dinner and going shopping. No matter how you do being sincere was the most important. I really hope that you can be good friends forever.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
Dear Tom
I’m glad to hear that you are considering make up with Peter. If I am you I would consider a bike as a birthday
making were
present for him.
As far as I know it Peter is always in poor health so he can take more exercises by riding a bike to build up his
exercise
body. In the meanwhile you can often go outing by bike together which is helpfully in rebuilding your friendship.
helpful
Beside taking a bike is an environmentally-friendly means of transport. It’s convenient him to get around as well.
Besides
Apart from giving him the gift you can also adopt other means such as traveling seeing a movie having dinner
a
and going shopping. No matter how you do being sincere was the most important. I really hope that you can be good
what is
friends forever.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
Dear Tom
I’m glad to hear that you are considering make up with Peter. If I am you I would consider a bike as a birthday
making were
present for him.
As far as I know it Peter is always in poor health so he can take more exercises by riding a bike to build up his
exercise
body. In the meanwhile you can often go outing by bike together which is helpfully in rebuilding your friendship.
helpful
Beside taking a bike is an environmentally-friendly means of transport. It’s convenient him to get around as well.
Besides
Apart from giving him the gift you can also adopt other means such as traveling seeing a movie having dinner
a
and going shopping. No matter how you do being sincere was the most important. I really hope that you can be good
what is
friends forever.
Best wishes!
Li Hua