假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。（10分）增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面写出修改后的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词。 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。（10分）

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面写出修改后的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

One of a most challenging experiences that I had so far is moving to Miami from Paraguay when I was fifteen years old. On my first day of school I became extremely nervously because several uncertain thought occurred to me. Would people treat to me nicely? Would I like the school? However before I got there I felt something amazed about that place. All my nervous thoughts went away and I was totally relaxed because the teachers and the students were very friendly for me. Also thanks to modern technology it was easy for us to keep in touch with my friends and family back home which helped me overcame the feeling of homesickness to some extent.

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when I was fifteen years old. On my first day of school I became extremely nervously

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because several uncertain thought occurred to me. Would people treat to me nicely?

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Would I like the school? However before I got there I felt something amazed about

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that place. All my nervous thoughts went away and I was totally relaxed because the teachers and the students were very friendly for me. Also thanks to modern technology it was easy for

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us to keep in touch with my friends and family back home which helped me

me

overcame the feeling of homesickness to some extent.

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