2019-05-29
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每句错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear John
I’m writing to recommend a book with you. Journey to the West is one of the most famous Chinese novel which was writing by Cheng’en Wu 400 years ago.
There have many magic and strange stories in the book through them we know many principles of our lives. The most important things in your life are belief loyalty and devotion. Beside we can learn about the power of love. If we want to be happy we should love and help the others. What’s more we must be strong in mind if we want achieve success.
I think this book was interesting and valuable.
Li Minghao
Dear John
I’m writing to recommend a book ①with you. Journey to the West is one of the most famous Chinese ②novel which was ③writing by Cheng’en Wu 400 years ago.
There ④have many magic and strange stories in the book through ⑤them we know many principles of our lives. The most important things in ⑥your life are belief loyalty and devotion. ⑦Beside we can learn about the power of love. If we want to be happy we should love and help ⑧the others. What’s more we must be strong in mind if we want ⑨achieve success.
I think this book ⑩was interesting and valuable.
Li Minghao
①with→to ②novel→novels ③ writing→ written
④have→are ⑤ them→which ⑥your→ our ⑦ Beside→ Besides
⑧去掉the ⑨achieve→ to achieve ⑩was→ is
Dear John
I’m writing to recommend a book ①with you. Journey to the West is one of the most famous Chinese ②novel which was ③writing by Cheng’en Wu 400 years ago.
There ④have many magic and strange stories in the book through ⑤them we know many principles of our lives. The most important things in ⑥your life are belief loyalty and devotion. ⑦Beside we can learn about the power of love. If we want to be happy we should love and help ⑧the others. What’s more we must be strong in mind if we want ⑨achieve success.
I think this book ⑩was interesting and valuable.
Li Minghao
①with→to ②novel→novels ③ writing→ written
④have→are ⑤ them→which ⑥your→ our ⑦ Beside→ Besides
⑧去掉the ⑨achieve→ to achieve ⑩was→ is