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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中 共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。 There are lots of experience in our life. T

2019-05-29

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中

共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

There are lots of experience in our life. The most unforgettable one for me is the speech competition holding last year. I’m interested in English. When my English teacher told me that I had chosen to take part in the speech competition I devoted me to the preparation. I was determined to win the first prize. I was such nervous when I stood on the stage that I forgot everything. Not until I caught a sight of my teacher did I calm down. Finally,I do a good job. When I heard I got the first prize,my heart was filled in joy and tears rolled down. Through this speech competition,I understand that it is confident that makes people successfully.

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1.experience改为experiences2.holding改为hold3.加上been4.me改为myself5.such改为so6.去掉a7.do改为did8.in改为with9.confident改为confidence10.successfully改为successful/succeed

分 析:
考查后置定语,固定短语,时态等。1. are lots of experience in our life,lots of要修饰可数名词复数,故experience改为experiences2. most unforgettable one for me is the speech competition holding last year.要做competition的后置定语,应是被举行,故用ed形式表被动,故holding改为hold3. my English teacher told me that I had chosen to take part in the speech competition 我应是被选择参加演讲比赛,故在had后加上been4. devoted me to the preparation.,devote oneself to…固定短语,致力于…故me改为myself5. was such nervous when I stood on the stage that I forgot everything.so…that…固定句型,如此…以致…我如此紧张以致于站在台上时忘了一切,故such改为so6. until I caught a sight of my teacher,catch sight of…固定短语,看见….故去掉a7. do a good job,本文是讲述过去的事,应用过去时,故do改为did8. heart was filled in joy,be filled with固定短语,充满了…. 故in改为with9. is confident that makes people successfully,it is ..that是强调句,本句是表达自信使人成功,应用自信的名词形式,故confident改为confidence10. is confident that makes people successfully,make为使役动词,后接动词原形或形容词表示使人…,故successfully改为successful/succeed
考点:
考查词汇及语法知识
1.experience改为experiences2.holding改为hold3.加上been4.me改为myself5.such改为so6.去掉a7.do改为did8.in改为with9.confident改为confidence10.successfully改为successful/succeed

分 析:
考查后置定语,固定短语,时态等。1. are lots of experience in our life,lots of要修饰可数名词复数,故experience改为experiences2. most unforgettable one for me is the speech competition holding last year.要做competition的后置定语,应是被举行,故用ed形式表被动,故holding改为hold3. my English teacher told me that I had chosen to take part in the speech competition 我应是被选择参加演讲比赛,故在had后加上been4. devoted me to the preparation.,devote oneself to…固定短语,致力于…故me改为myself5. was such nervous when I stood on the stage that I forgot everything.so…that…固定句型,如此…以致…我如此紧张以致于站在台上时忘了一切,故such改为so6. until I caught a sight of my teacher,catch sight of…固定短语,看见….故去掉a7. do a good job,本文是讲述过去的事,应用过去时,故do改为did8. heart was filled in joy,be filled with固定短语,充满了…. 故in改为with9. is confident that makes people successfully,it is ..that是强调句,本句是表达自信使人成功,应用自信的名词形式,故confident改为confidence10. is confident that makes people successfully,make为使役动词,后接动词原形或形容词表示使人…,故successfully改为successful/succeed
考点:
考查词汇及语法知识
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