假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．One day I woke up and smelled fire．I got back and ran out of
2019-05-29
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
One day I woke up and smelled fire．I got back and ran out of the apartment immediate．Outside I see a woman in the second-floor window holding out a newborn baby．He asked me to catch．Without the second thought，I rushed over and held out my arms．After I knew it，the baby had landed in my arms．I was so much happy that it was fine．The mother had to jump out of the window，either．Later，she thanked me for save her baby．It felt greatly to be a good neighbor．
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One day I woke up and smelled fire．I got back and ran out of the apartment immediate．Outside I see a woman in the second-floor window holding out a newborn baby．He asked me to catch．Without the second thought，I rushed over and held out my arms．After I knew it，the baby had landed in my arms．I was so much happy that it was fine．The mother had to jump out of the window，either．Later，she thanked me for save her baby．It felt greatly to be a good neighbor
详
1．back改为up；考查固定短语，分析句意应为"我起床跑出去"，get up 意为"起床"．
2．immediate改为immediately；考查副词，这里用副词在句中作状语．
3．see改为saw考查动词的时态，这里讲的是过去发生的事情，故用一般过去时saw．
4．He改为She考查人称代词，根据上文中的 I see a woman 可知此处人称代词应该用She．
5．the改为a；考查冠词，without a second thought 是固定搭配，意为"毫不犹豫"．
6．After改为Before；考查句意，分析句意应为"在我明白之前，婴儿降落在我的怀里"，所以此处应该用Before
7．much去掉；考查固定结构，本句中用的是"so…that…"结构，这里much多余，故去掉．
8．either改为too；考查同义词辨析，either和too有表示"也"，但too用于肯定句中，either用于否定句中，故本句中要用too．
9．save改为saving；考查非谓语动词，介词for后面要用动名词形式．
10．greatly改为great；考查形容词，这里用形容词形式great作系动词felt的表语．
One day I woke up and smelled fire．I got back and ran out of the apartment immediate．Outside I see a woman in the second-floor window holding out a newborn baby．He asked me to catch．Without the second thought，I rushed over and held out my arms．After I knew it，the baby had landed in my arms．I was so much happy that it was fine．The mother had to jump out of the window，either．Later，she thanked me for save her baby．It felt greatly to be a good neighbor
详
1．back改为up；考查固定短语，分析句意应为"我起床跑出去"，get up 意为"起床"．
2．immediate改为immediately；考查副词，这里用副词在句中作状语．
3．see改为saw考查动词的时态，这里讲的是过去发生的事情，故用一般过去时saw．
4．He改为She考查人称代词，根据上文中的 I see a woman 可知此处人称代词应该用She．
5．the改为a；考查冠词，without a second thought 是固定搭配，意为"毫不犹豫"．
6．After改为Before；考查句意，分析句意应为"在我明白之前，婴儿降落在我的怀里"，所以此处应该用Before
7．much去掉；考查固定结构，本句中用的是"so…that…"结构，这里much多余，故去掉．
8．either改为too；考查同义词辨析，either和too有表示"也"，但too用于肯定句中，either用于否定句中，故本句中要用too．
9．save改为saving；考查非谓语动词，介词for后面要用动名词形式．
10．greatly改为great；考查形容词，这里用形容词形式great作系动词felt的表语．