2019-05-29
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Sunny 31st July
It was sunny today and I was in a good mood. Tired of studying or the noise of city life I come to the ecology park to enjoy scenery and get relaxing in the afternoon.
While I arrived at the park what came into its sight were the thick green trees. The air was fresh. In addition I could clearly see a path around the pond. Lying on the grasses decorated with various flowers I felt with ease because all that I wanted was peace inside.
Therefore with time going by quickly the sun was setting in the west. So I had to return back home. I would never forget such romantic experience which was really beyond description.
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or-and
come-came
relaxing-relaxed
While-When
its-my
grasses-grass
with-at
Therefore-However
去掉back
such后加a
第二句:or-and; come-came; relaxing-relaxed 第三句:While-When; its-my 第六句:grasses-grass; with-at 第七句: Therefore-However第八句:去掉back 第九句:such后加 >a
or-and
come-came
relaxing-relaxed
While-When
its-my
grasses-grass
with-at
Therefore-However
去掉back
such后加a