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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分. Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to you

2019-05-29

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.

Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing to you to complain about the quality of a cell phone I bought it in your shop a week before. It costs me more than 500 dollar but it doesn’t work and there seems to be something wrong with it.

I don’t know what has caused that but I would like you solve the problem for me. I insist that you can change it for another one and return my money. I think it is better for you to make sure whether everything in your shop is good .Then you will have even many customers.

Look forward to hearing from you soon.

                                                               Yours truly

                                                                Li Hua

优质解答

I am writing to you to complain about the quality of a cell phone I bought it

in your shop a week before. It costs me more than 500 dollar but it doesn’t work

                  ago     cost                 dollars     

and there seems to be something wrong with it .

   

   I don’t know what has caused that but I would like you/\ solve the problems

                                                  to

for me. I  insist that you can change it for anther one and return my money. I

                      Should                   or

think it is better for you to make sure whether everything in your shop is   

                                   that

good .Then you will have even many > customers.

                          more

    Look forward to hearing from you soon.

     Looking



I am writing to you to complain about the quality of a cell phone I bought it

in your shop a week before. It costs me more than 500 dollar but it doesn’t work

                  ago     cost                 dollars     

and there seems to be something wrong with it .

   

   I don’t know what has caused that but I would like you/\ solve the problems

                                                  to

for me. I  insist that you can change it for anther one and return my money. I

                      Should                   or

think it is better for you to make sure whether everything in your shop is   

                                   that

good .Then you will have even many > customers.

                          more

    Look forward to hearing from you soon.

     Looking


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