2019-05-29
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Helen
I have heard about your situation and I’m so glad to talk with you but help you out.
To tell truth it is natural that you are missing your parents because it was the first time you have left your homeland to study abroad. That I want to say is that you can’t live without your parents all the life. The present situation can help you grow and make you more independently.
If you like I would like to be your friends. We can play chat discuss and doing everything we like it. Thus we can learn about each other habits and learn from each other. Only by communicating with others can you overcome your difficulties.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
Dear Helen
I have heard about your situation and I’m so glad to talk with you but help you out.
and
To tell ︿truth it is natural that you are missing your parents because it was the first time you
the is
have left your homeland to study abroad. That I want to say is that you can’t live without your
What with
parents all the life. The present situation can help you grow and make you more independently
independent
If you like I would like to be your friends. We can play chat discuss and doing everything we
friend do
like it Thus we can learn about each other habits and learn from each other. Only by
去掉it other’s
communicating with others can you overcome your difficulties.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
Dear Helen
I have heard about your situation and I’m so glad to talk with you but help you out.
and
To tell ︿truth it is natural that you are missing your parents because it was the first time you
the is
have left your homeland to study abroad. That I want to say is that you can’t live without your
What with
parents all the life. The present situation can help you grow and make you more independently
independent
If you like I would like to be your friends. We can play chat discuss and doing everything we
friend do
like it Thus we can learn about each other habits and learn from each other. Only by
去掉it other’s
communicating with others can you overcome your difficulties.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua