假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改． 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词． 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉． 修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词． 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； &nbs
2019-05-29
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起不计分）．
I have been reading a book about Henry Ford．He was an eldest son of a farmer in Michigan．His father hoped he would help him on the farm，and Henry was not interested in farm work at all．He did everything he could keep away from it．Therefore，Henry was not a lazy boy．He was addicted in mechanical work．Later，Henry took a job as a mechanic，showing greatly interest in steam engines．In 1908，he had built the famous"Model T"．This car was popular that it was unchanging for twenty years．Five years after that，he started the Ford Motor Company，what made the US a nation on wheels and helped the US become what it is now．
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I have been reading a book about Henry Ford．He was an eldest son of a farmer in Michigan．His father hoped he would help him on the farm，and Henry was not interested in farm work at all．He did everything he could∧keep away from it．Therefore，Henry was not a lazy boy．He was addicted in mechanical work．Later，Henry took a job as a mechanic，showing greatly interest in steam engines．In 1908，he had built the famous"Model T"．This car was∧popular that it was unchanging for twenty years．Five years after that，he started the Ford Motor Company，what made the US a nation on wheels and helped the US become what it is now．
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1．an改为the 考查冠词．eldest是形容词最高级，其前加定冠词the．
2．and改为but 考查连词．前后两个单句表示转折关系，而非并列关系，用连词but．
3．加to 考查动词不定式．he could do是定语从句修饰先行词everything，因主句中有did，从句中的do要省略，此处动词不定式表示目的，作目的状语．
4．Therefore改为However 考查副词．however表示转折，尤其用于谈及一个既成事实时，表示转折，其意为"可是""仍然"等．可放在句首、句中或句末，通常用逗号与句子其他成分隔开．
5．in改为to 考查介词．be addicted to意为"沉迷于"，是固定搭配．
6．greatly改为great 考查形容词．interest是名词，要用形容词修饰．
7．the改为a 考查冠词．Model是可数名词，单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指．
8．加so 考查固定搭配．so…that…意为"如此/这么…以致于…"，句型中的so是副词，常常用来修饰形容词或副词，常用句型为：主语+谓语+so+adj．/adv．+that从句．
9．unchanging改为unchanged 考查动词语态．it与unchange之间是动宾关系，要用一般过去时的被动语态．
10．what改为which 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词是前面整个句子，在从句中作主语，用关系代词which．
I have been reading a book about Henry Ford．He was an eldest son of a farmer in Michigan．His father hoped he would help him on the farm，and Henry was not interested in farm work at all．He did everything he could∧keep away from it．Therefore，Henry was not a lazy boy．He was addicted in mechanical work．Later，Henry took a job as a mechanic，showing greatly interest in steam engines．In 1908，he had built the famous"Model T"．This car was∧popular that it was unchanging for twenty years．Five years after that，he started the Ford Motor Company，what made the US a nation on wheels and helped the US become what it is now．
详
1．an改为the 考查冠词．eldest是形容词最高级，其前加定冠词the．
2．and改为but 考查连词．前后两个单句表示转折关系，而非并列关系，用连词but．
3．加to 考查动词不定式．he could do是定语从句修饰先行词everything，因主句中有did，从句中的do要省略，此处动词不定式表示目的，作目的状语．
4．Therefore改为However 考查副词．however表示转折，尤其用于谈及一个既成事实时，表示转折，其意为"可是""仍然"等．可放在句首、句中或句末，通常用逗号与句子其他成分隔开．
5．in改为to 考查介词．be addicted to意为"沉迷于"，是固定搭配．
6．greatly改为great 考查形容词．interest是名词，要用形容词修饰．
7．the改为a 考查冠词．Model是可数名词，单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指．
8．加so 考查固定搭配．so…that…意为"如此/这么…以致于…"，句型中的so是副词，常常用来修饰形容词或副词，常用句型为：主语+谓语+so+adj．/adv．+that从句．
9．unchanging改为unchanged 考查动词语态．it与unchange之间是动宾关系，要用一般过去时的被动语态．
10．what改为which 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词是前面整个句子，在从句中作主语，用关系代词which．