英语
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每次错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.Discover the real you.Don't blind&nb

2019-05-29

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每次错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(作业帮),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Discover the real you.Don't blind accept the role you are conditioned of others to play.You have your own path to follow it.Be your own independent person.Accept full responsibility for your life.Don't live as a doormat,a sheep,and a victim.You must accept that you're the creator of your life and that no one came to rescue you.
Build the courage to express ourselves.Voice your truth.It's well worth heard.If some person react negatively,that's their problem.Ask for what you want; you can't expect others be mind-readers.Directly tell others what you want to be treated.If you don't speak up for yourself,who will?
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Discover the real you.Don't blind accept the role you are conditioned of others to play.
                                            blindly                                                 by
You have your own path to follow it.Be your own independent person.Accept full responsibility
                                                   去掉
 for your life.Don't live as a doormat,a sheep,and a victim.You must accept that you're the 
                                                                         or
creator of your life and that no one came to rescue you.
                                                   comes
Build the courage to express ourselves.Voice your truth.It's well worth heard.If some person
                                           yourself                                                  hearing             persons
 react negatively,that's their problem.Ask for what you want; you can't expect others∧be mind-readers.
                                                                                                                                to
Directly tell others what you want to be treated.If you don't speak up for yourself,who will?
                            how
71.blind→blindly  考查副词,本句中修饰谓语动词,所以用副词.
72.of→by  考查介词.句中表示被动关系,所以用介词by.
73.去掉it   考查固定搭配. have sth to do,其中do的逻辑宾语是前面的名词,后面不需要加宾语.所以去掉it.
74.and→or  考查来连词.前后之间是选择关系.所以用or.
75.came→comes 考查时态.整个文章都是用的一般现在时态,所以该处不应该用过去时,主语是no one,所以用第三人称单数形式.
76.ourselves→yourself    考查反身代词.本句是祈使句,句子的主语省略,主语应该是"你",所以后面的反身代词应该用yourself.
77.heard→hearing     考查固定短语搭配. be worth doing是固定短语,用主动式表示被动,所以用hearing.
78.person→persons    考查名词单复数.person是可数名词,前面是some修饰,所以应该应复数形式.
79.others和 be中间添加 to   考查不定式. expect  sb to do是固定搭配,意思是‘'期望某人做某事‘'.
80.what→how 考查宾语从句连接词.从句后面不缺主语或宾语,所以用连接副词.句意为:直接告诉别人你想要怎么被对待.所以用how.
Discover the real you.Don't blind accept the role you are conditioned of others to play.
                                            blindly                                                 by
You have your own path to follow it.Be your own independent person.Accept full responsibility
                                                   去掉
 for your life.Don't live as a doormat,a sheep,and a victim.You must accept that you're the 
                                                                         or
creator of your life and that no one came to rescue you.
                                                   comes
Build the courage to express ourselves.Voice your truth.It's well worth heard.If some person
                                           yourself                                                  hearing             persons
 react negatively,that's their problem.Ask for what you want; you can't expect others∧be mind-readers.
                                                                                                                                to
Directly tell others what you want to be treated.If you don't speak up for yourself,who will?
                            how
71.blind→blindly  考查副词,本句中修饰谓语动词,所以用副词.
72.of→by  考查介词.句中表示被动关系,所以用介词by.
73.去掉it   考查固定搭配. have sth to do,其中do的逻辑宾语是前面的名词,后面不需要加宾语.所以去掉it.
74.and→or  考查来连词.前后之间是选择关系.所以用or.
75.came→comes 考查时态.整个文章都是用的一般现在时态,所以该处不应该用过去时,主语是no one,所以用第三人称单数形式.
76.ourselves→yourself    考查反身代词.本句是祈使句,句子的主语省略,主语应该是"你",所以后面的反身代词应该用yourself.
77.heard→hearing     考查固定短语搭配. be worth doing是固定短语,用主动式表示被动,所以用hearing.
78.person→persons    考查名词单复数.person是可数名词,前面是some修饰,所以应该应复数形式.
79.others和 be中间添加 to   考查不定式. expect  sb to do是固定搭配,意思是‘'期望某人做某事‘'.
80.what→how 考查宾语从句连接词.从句后面不缺主语或宾语,所以用连接副词.句意为:直接告诉别人你想要怎么被对待.所以用how.
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