假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：（1）．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；（2）．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．Young people have different attitude towards music．As we all
2019-05-29
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：（1）．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Young people have different attitude towards music．As we all known，most people throughout the world love music．Anyway，nowadays young people have begun to show enthusiasm for pop stars．Many young people have a greatly passion for different kinds of pop music．They buy CDs and to download songs from the Internet．They enjoy the excitement pop music bring，and try to convey their own ideas in pop music．
As far as I concerned，we cannot deny that pop music is an essential part of our life．However，follow pop music blind should be discouraged．That we should do is to take a more critical attitude towards the pursuit of pop music．
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Young people have different attitude towards music．As we all known，most people throughout the world love music．
attitudes know
Anyway，nowadays young people have begun to show enthusiasm for pop stars．Many young people have a greatly passion
However great
for different kinds of pop music．They buy CDs and to download songs from the Internet．They enjoy the excitement pop music bring，
去掉 brings
and try to convey their own ideas in pop music．
As far as I∧concerned，we cannot deny that pop music is an essential part of our life．However，follow pop music blind should
am As far as I∧concerned following blindly
be discouraged．That we should do is to take a more critical attitude towards the pursuit of pop music．
What
1．attitude→attitudes 考查名词单复数．attitude是可数名词，前面有different修饰，所以用复数形式．
2．known→know 考查谓语动词形式．本句是主动语态，所以用know而不是known．
3．Anyway→However 考查副词．前后两句之间的关系是转折关系，又有逗号隔开，所以用however．
4．greatly→great 考查形容词．本句是修饰名词，所以要用形容词的形式．
5．删除to 考查动词形式．句中的download和前面的buy应该是并列关系，所以应该用动词原形，不需要to．
6．bring→brings 考查主谓一致．主语是pop music，所以谓语动词应该用第三人称单数形式．
7．I后加am 考查谓语动词．As far as I am concerned是固定句式，意思是"我认为"．
8．follow→following 考查非谓语动词．本句需要用动名词作主语．
9．blind→blindly 考查副词．修饰动词短语，所以要用副词形式．
10．That→What 考查名词性从句．该句中含有主语从句．从句中缺少宾语，所以用what．
Young people have different attitude towards music．As we all known，most people throughout the world love music．
attitudes know
Anyway，nowadays young people have begun to show enthusiasm for pop stars．Many young people have a greatly passion
However great
for different kinds of pop music．They buy CDs and to download songs from the Internet．They enjoy the excitement pop music bring，
去掉 brings
and try to convey their own ideas in pop music．
As far as I∧concerned，we cannot deny that pop music is an essential part of our life．However，follow pop music blind should
am As far as I∧concerned following blindly
be discouraged．That we should do is to take a more critical attitude towards the pursuit of pop music．
What
1．attitude→attitudes 考查名词单复数．attitude是可数名词，前面有different修饰，所以用复数形式．
2．known→know 考查谓语动词形式．本句是主动语态，所以用know而不是known．
3．Anyway→However 考查副词．前后两句之间的关系是转折关系，又有逗号隔开，所以用however．
4．greatly→great 考查形容词．本句是修饰名词，所以要用形容词的形式．
5．删除to 考查动词形式．句中的download和前面的buy应该是并列关系，所以应该用动词原形，不需要to．
6．bring→brings 考查主谓一致．主语是pop music，所以谓语动词应该用第三人称单数形式．
7．I后加am 考查谓语动词．As far as I am concerned是固定句式，意思是"我认为"．
8．follow→following 考查非谓语动词．本句需要用动名词作主语．
9．blind→blindly 考查副词．修饰动词短语，所以要用副词形式．
10．That→What 考查名词性从句．该句中含有主语从句．从句中缺少宾语，所以用what．