假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．The other day I had unusual experience．I was walking along a
2019-05-29
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
The other day I had unusual experience．I was walking along a street when I saw a lady knocking down by a car．But the driver just drives away．Immediately I rushed through the street to help him．I put her on my back and carried her to a hospital nearby．On reaching the hospital，however，she started to say I was to be blame for her injury and demanded I paid the hospital bills．That really surprised me!Unless I tried to explain，she insisted that I was the very person who was responsible for the accident．I was total confused．Is it right or wrong to help other？
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The other day I had∧unusual experience．I was walking along a street
when I saw a lady knocking down by a car．But the driver just drives
away．Immediately I rushed through the street to help him．I put her on
my back and carried her to a hospital nearby．On reaching the hospital，
however，she started to say I was to be blame for her injury and
demanded I paid the hospital bills．That really surprised me!Unless I
tried to explain，she insisted that I was the very person who was responsible
for the accident．I was total confused．Is it right or wrong to help other？
详
1．在unusual之前加an 考查不定冠词 此处用来修饰单数名词 experience，表示泛指"一次不寻常的经历"；由于其后的形容词unusual 首字母的发音为元音/ʌ/；故用an．
2．knocking改为knocked 考查过去分词 此处在句中作后置定语，修饰名词a lady；由于动词knock与该名词构成被动关系，故用过去分词knocked．
3．drives改为drove 考查时态 根据上文可知，此处表示发生在"The other day"（前几天） 的事情，应使用一般过去时；故用drove．
4．through改为across 考查介词词义辨析 through表示从空间穿过；across指从表面横穿；这里指的是：穿过街道；故用across．
5．him改为her 考查句意理解以及人称代词的一致性 结合上文可知，本句的意思是：我立刻冲到街对面去帮她；此处在句中作动词 help 的宾语，指的是那位被车撞倒的女士；故用her．
6．去掉be 考查习语表达 be to blame for 意为：应受责备，因…责备； 故去掉be．
7． paid 改为pay 考查虚拟语气 此处在动词demanded之后的宾语从句中作谓语；应使用（should）+do 的结构；故用pay．
8．Unless改为Although或Though 考查句意理解以及从属连词 本句的意思是：虽然我试图解释，但她坚持说，我就是那个应对此次事故负责的人；此处用在句首，引导让步状语从句；故用Although或Though．
9．total改为totally 考查副词 此处用来修饰形容词confused；故用副词totally．
10．other改为others 考查不定代词 此处在句中作宾语，指的是：其他的一些人，应使用other的复数形式；故用others．
The other day I had∧unusual experience．I was walking along a street
when I saw a lady knocking down by a car．But the driver just drives
away．Immediately I rushed through the street to help him．I put her on
my back and carried her to a hospital nearby．On reaching the hospital，
however，she started to say I was to be blame for her injury and
demanded I paid the hospital bills．That really surprised me!Unless I
tried to explain，she insisted that I was the very person who was responsible
for the accident．I was total confused．Is it right or wrong to help other？
详
1．在unusual之前加an 考查不定冠词 此处用来修饰单数名词 experience，表示泛指"一次不寻常的经历"；由于其后的形容词unusual 首字母的发音为元音/ʌ/；故用an．
2．knocking改为knocked 考查过去分词 此处在句中作后置定语，修饰名词a lady；由于动词knock与该名词构成被动关系，故用过去分词knocked．
3．drives改为drove 考查时态 根据上文可知，此处表示发生在"The other day"（前几天） 的事情，应使用一般过去时；故用drove．
4．through改为across 考查介词词义辨析 through表示从空间穿过；across指从表面横穿；这里指的是：穿过街道；故用across．
5．him改为her 考查句意理解以及人称代词的一致性 结合上文可知，本句的意思是：我立刻冲到街对面去帮她；此处在句中作动词 help 的宾语，指的是那位被车撞倒的女士；故用her．
6．去掉be 考查习语表达 be to blame for 意为：应受责备，因…责备； 故去掉be．
7． paid 改为pay 考查虚拟语气 此处在动词demanded之后的宾语从句中作谓语；应使用（should）+do 的结构；故用pay．
8．Unless改为Although或Though 考查句意理解以及从属连词 本句的意思是：虽然我试图解释，但她坚持说，我就是那个应对此次事故负责的人；此处用在句首，引导让步状语从句；故用Although或Though．
9．total改为totally 考查副词 此处用来修饰形容词confused；故用副词totally．
10．other改为others 考查不定代词 此处在句中作宾语，指的是：其他的一些人，应使用other的复数形式；故用others．