谁帮我改改这段作文?!On one hand, both eating more healthy food and doing more exercises are beneficial to our physical health. Firstly, vegetables and fruits contain vitamins that help tissues from damage, and can not only milk add calcium body needed, but also it
2019-05-29
谁帮我改改这段作文?!
On one hand, both eating more healthy food and doing more exercises are beneficial to our physical health. Firstly, vegetables and fruits contain vitamins that help tissues from damage, and can not only milk add calcium body needed, but also it is beneficial to sleep. However, it will be not good for our health that eating overmuch junk food such as instant noodles included many additives. Secondly…准备写做运动了.
改语法和更好的表达.多谢!
not only我想用倒装。。但是貌似写错了。。。改为：not only can milk.....不知道对不。。
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On the one hand,eating more healthy food and doing more exercises are beneficial
to our health.Eating vegetables and fruits is essential as they contain vitamins.Not only milk
supplies calcium element we need,but also it is beneficial for sleep.However,
it is not good for our health to eat too much junk food such as instant noodles and fried chips.
The former contains many artificial additives and the latter has high energy and lots fats.
On the one hand,eating more healthy food and doing more exercises are beneficial
to our health.Eating vegetables and fruits is essential as they contain vitamins.Not only milk
supplies calcium element we need,but also it is beneficial for sleep.However,
it is not good for our health to eat too much junk food such as instant noodles and fried chips.
The former contains many artificial additives and the latter has high energy and lots fats.