假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词． 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．There&
2019-05-29
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
There are lots of experience in our life．The most unforgettable one for me is the speech competition holding last year．I'm interested in English．When my English teacher told me that I had chosen to take part in the speech competition，I devoted me to the preparation．I was determined to win the first prize．I was such nervous when I stood on the stage that I forgot everything．Not until I caught a sight of my teacher did I calm down．Finally，I do a good job．When I heard I got the first prize，my heart was filled in joy and tears rolled down．Through this speech competition，I understand that it is confidence which makes people succeeded..
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There are lots of experience in our life．The most unforgettable one for me is the speech competition holding last year．I'm interested in English．When my English teacher told me that I had∧chosen to take part in the speech competition，I devoted me to the preparation．I was determined to win the first prize．I was such nervous when I stood on the stage that I forgot everything．Not until I caught a sight of my teacher did I calm down．Finally，I do a good job．When I heard I got the first prize，my heart was filled in joy and tears rolled down．Through this speech competition，I understand that it is confidence which makes people succeeded..
详
1．experience改为experiences 考查名词单复数．此处"experience"为可数名词，意为"经历"，生活中有很多难忘的经历．
2．holding改为held 考查非谓语．"speech competition "和"hold"之间是被动关系，故用过去分词做后置定语，即"held"．
3．had^been chosen 考查被动语态．根据句意此处我是被选上，是被动语态．
4．me改为myself 考查代词．devote oneself to意为投身于，致力于，故用myself．
5．such改为so 考查连接词． 此句里是一个固定短语，即so+adj+that 意为如此…以至于． such后需加名词．
6．caught a sight 去掉a 考查冠词．catch sight of 为固定短语，意为看到．
7．do 改为did 考查时态．叙述的过去的事情，故用过去时did．
8．in改为with 考查介词．此处也考查固定短语，be filled with意为充满，填满．
9．which改为that 考查连接词．此处是一个强调句，故强调句句型为It is+被强调部分+that…
10．succeeded改为succeed 考查动词． make 为使役动词，后需用动词原形，即make sb do．
There are lots of experience in our life．The most unforgettable one for me is the speech competition holding last year．I'm interested in English．When my English teacher told me that I had∧chosen to take part in the speech competition，I devoted me to the preparation．I was determined to win the first prize．I was such nervous when I stood on the stage that I forgot everything．Not until I caught a sight of my teacher did I calm down．Finally，I do a good job．When I heard I got the first prize，my heart was filled in joy and tears rolled down．Through this speech competition，I understand that it is confidence which makes people succeeded..
详
1．experience改为experiences 考查名词单复数．此处"experience"为可数名词，意为"经历"，生活中有很多难忘的经历．
2．holding改为held 考查非谓语．"speech competition "和"hold"之间是被动关系，故用过去分词做后置定语，即"held"．
3．had^been chosen 考查被动语态．根据句意此处我是被选上，是被动语态．
4．me改为myself 考查代词．devote oneself to意为投身于，致力于，故用myself．
5．such改为so 考查连接词． 此句里是一个固定短语，即so+adj+that 意为如此…以至于． such后需加名词．
6．caught a sight 去掉a 考查冠词．catch sight of 为固定短语，意为看到．
7．do 改为did 考查时态．叙述的过去的事情，故用过去时did．
8．in改为with 考查介词．此处也考查固定短语，be filled with意为充满，填满．
9．which改为that 考查连接词．此处是一个强调句，故强调句句型为It is+被强调部分+that…
10．succeeded改为succeed 考查动词． make 为使役动词，后需用动词原形，即make sb do．