假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中 10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1． 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2． 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．On my way home after school there had an accident．A heavy t
2019-05-29
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中 10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1． 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2． 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
On my way home after school there had an accident．A heavy truck hit a bike，caused the young woman on the bike to fall to the ground heavy．As a result，one of her leg was broken．Blood was running down his leg．A lot of people stood by watching，but everybody gave her hand．I hurriedly stopped a passed car，and the driver and I carried the injury woman into the car．Then we took her to the hospital nearby．The doctors treated her in time and she is soon out of danger．
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On my way home after school there had an accident．A heavy truck hit a bike，caused the young woman on the bike to fall to the ground heavy．As a result，one of her leg was broken．Blood was running down his leg．A lot of people stood by watching，but everybody gave her∧hand．I hurriedly stopped a passed car，and the driver and I carried the injury woman into the car．Then we took her to the hospital nearby．The doctors treated her in time and she is soon out of danger．
详
1：had改为was；考查there be句型．There不与have连用，故把had改为was．
2：caused改为causing；考查非谓语动词．一辆卡车撞到了一辆自行车，造成…，track与cause是主谓关系，应该使用现在分词作伴随状语，故把caused改为causing．
3：heavy改为heavily；考查副词，此处用副词作状语修饰动词fall．
4：leg改为legs；考查名词单复数，one of 后面跟名词复数形式．
5：his改为her；考查人称代词．根据"the young woman"可知，受害人是一个年轻女子，故把his改为her．
6：everybody改为obody；考查不定代词．分析句意为"但是没有人伸出援助之手"，故把everybody改为obody．
7：hand前面加a；考查冠词，give sb a hand是固定短语，意为"帮助某人，给某人帮助"．
8：passed改为passing；考查非谓语动词．一辆正在行驶的汽车，应该使用现在分词作前置定语，故把passed改为passing．
9：injury改为jnjured；考查形容词．injured受伤的，injury是名词，不作定语，故把injury改为jnjured，作定语修饰后面的名词woman．
10：is改为was；考查时态．根据前文可知，文章叙述的是过去的事情，应该用一般过去时，故把is改为was．
On my way home after school there had an accident．A heavy truck hit a bike，caused the young woman on the bike to fall to the ground heavy．As a result，one of her leg was broken．Blood was running down his leg．A lot of people stood by watching，but everybody gave her∧hand．I hurriedly stopped a passed car，and the driver and I carried the injury woman into the car．Then we took her to the hospital nearby．The doctors treated her in time and she is soon out of danger．
详
1：had改为was；考查there be句型．There不与have连用，故把had改为was．
2：caused改为causing；考查非谓语动词．一辆卡车撞到了一辆自行车，造成…，track与cause是主谓关系，应该使用现在分词作伴随状语，故把caused改为causing．
3：heavy改为heavily；考查副词，此处用副词作状语修饰动词fall．
4：leg改为legs；考查名词单复数，one of 后面跟名词复数形式．
5：his改为her；考查人称代词．根据"the young woman"可知，受害人是一个年轻女子，故把his改为her．
6：everybody改为obody；考查不定代词．分析句意为"但是没有人伸出援助之手"，故把everybody改为obody．
7：hand前面加a；考查冠词，give sb a hand是固定短语，意为"帮助某人，给某人帮助"．
8：passed改为passing；考查非谓语动词．一辆正在行驶的汽车，应该使用现在分词作前置定语，故把passed改为passing．
9：injury改为jnjured；考查形容词．injured受伤的，injury是名词，不作定语，故把injury改为jnjured，作定语修饰后面的名词woman．
10：is改为was；考查时态．根据前文可知，文章叙述的是过去的事情，应该用一般过去时，故把is改为was．