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Most people like to do the things which they always do.Little by little,it will become one of their habits.However,others claim that experiencing fresh things might be a better way of living.Therefore,a heated debate has been ignited on this issue.
1.would like 有一点客气
2.but 和 however 一样的意思不要重复,however 用在句子开头,but 用来把句子连接起来
3.experience 在这里应该用 -ing form 不懂怎么解释
4.你有一个毛病,就是句子不会中断,英文叫 run-off sentences
On one hand,to continue doing the same things can have an array of merits.People can save plenty of time doing things they are familiar with.Moreover,people feel confident to do the things they always do.Hence,they will receive a satisfactory work report and stay in a positive mood,which is beneficial to their health.In brief,to keep doing the same things is acceptable.
1."On one hand...On the other hand" 是 on 不是 in
2.不要一直 "people" "people" 的,可以用 "they"
3.不知道有没有 "in a word" 这种 conjunctions
On the other hand,repeating the same actions can have some drawbacks.Firstly,people may feel bored by the same schedule.Additionally,it may limit their technical area,fields of work and social circle.Henceforth,it has an adverse impact on their career.Besides,in contrast to changing habits,repeating the same actions lacks creativity and innovation.In short,attempting new things can bring new feelings and opportunities in other aspects.
1."in the first place" 不是“第一”的意思,是“本来”的意思
2."in the second place" - 没有这种表达法
In conclusion,taking all factors into account,I feel that people should try new things,but they need to consider what has to be changed and what should not be changed.Habits which are beneficial should be kept.
1."I" 就是 "personally"
2."what's gotta be changed" 是口语
3.你很喜欢加很多不需要的字
P.S.不要一直people
Most people like to do the things which they always do.Little by little,it will become one of their habits.However,others claim that experiencing fresh things might be a better way of living.Therefore,a heated debate has been ignited on this issue.
1.would like 有一点客气
2.but 和 however 一样的意思不要重复,however 用在句子开头,but 用来把句子连接起来
3.experience 在这里应该用 -ing form 不懂怎么解释
4.你有一个毛病,就是句子不会中断,英文叫 run-off sentences
On one hand,to continue doing the same things can have an array of merits.People can save plenty of time doing things they are familiar with.Moreover,people feel confident to do the things they always do.Hence,they will receive a satisfactory work report and stay in a positive mood,which is beneficial to their health.In brief,to keep doing the same things is acceptable.
1."On one hand...On the other hand" 是 on 不是 in
2.不要一直 "people" "people" 的,可以用 "they"
3.不知道有没有 "in a word" 这种 conjunctions
On the other hand,repeating the same actions can have some drawbacks.Firstly,people may feel bored by the same schedule.Additionally,it may limit their technical area,fields of work and social circle.Henceforth,it has an adverse impact on their career.Besides,in contrast to changing habits,repeating the same actions lacks creativity and innovation.In short,attempting new things can bring new feelings and opportunities in other aspects.
1."in the first place" 不是“第一”的意思,是“本来”的意思
2."in the second place" - 没有这种表达法
In conclusion,taking all factors into account,I feel that people should try new things,but they need to consider what has to be changed and what should not be changed.Habits which are beneficial should be kept.
1."I" 就是 "personally"
2."what's gotta be changed" 是口语
3.你很喜欢加很多不需要的字
P.S.不要一直people