英语
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同臬写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改,增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的问用(\)划掉.修改:在错的词下両一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;     2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.I've learned from the newspaper that your company is

2019-05-29

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同臬写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改,
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的问用(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下両一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
     2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
I've learned from the newspaper that your company is looking for receptionist.I m very interesting in the job and Fd like to apply to the position.
First of all,allow me to introduce myself.I had just graduated from high school and taken the University Entrance Examination.I want to find out a part-time job this summer.1m 18year old and have a good command of English,especial in terms of speaking and listening.In fact,I once won the first prize in the English speech competition hold in our school.Besides,I'm quite easy-going but therefore very popular among my classmates.
I sincerely hope you can give us a chance.I'm looking forward to your early reply.
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I've learned from the newspaper that your company is looking for∧receptionist.
I'm very interesting in the job and Fd like to apply to the position.
First of all,allow me to introduce myself.
I had just graduated from high school and taken the University Entrance Examination.
I want to find out a part-time job this summer.
I'm 18 year old and have a good command of English,especial in terms of speaking and listening.
In fact,I once won the first prize in the English speech competition hold in our school.
Besides,I'm quite easy-going but therefore very popular among my classmates.
I sincerely hope you can give us a chance.I'm looking forward to your early reply.
1.for后面加a 考查冠词.look for a receptionist"寻找一名接待人员",此处a+单数可数名词表示泛指.
2.interesting改为interested 考查形容词及固定搭配.be interested in"对…感兴趣".
3.to改为for 考查介词及固定词组.apply to意思是"适用于",apply for意思是"申请",根据句意可知此处表示"申请这个职位",因此把to改为for.
4.had改为have 考查时态.本句要表达的意思是"我"已经高中毕业,应该用现在完成时,而过去完成时had done表示"过去的过去",因此把had改为have.
5.去掉out.考查动词用法及动词短语.find"找到",find out"找出,查明",根据语境可知此处表示找到,因此把out去掉.
6.year改为years 考查名词.此处要表达的意思是"我是一位十八岁的男生"year应该用复数形式years.
7.especial改为especially 考查副词.此处用来修饰前面的动词have a good command of,因此用especially"尤其,特别".
8.hold 改为held 考查非谓语动词作定语.此处用过去分词held的短语作后置定语修饰前面的competition,held表示被动和完成.
9.but改为and 考查连词.此处I'm quite easy-going 和后面的句子therefore very popular among my classmates不是转折关系而是顺承关系,因此把but改为and.
10.us改为me 考查人称代词.此处主语是I,因此后面要表达的是"给我一个机会",因此把us改为me.
I've learned from the newspaper that your company is looking for∧receptionist.
I'm very interesting in the job and Fd like to apply to the position.
First of all,allow me to introduce myself.
I had just graduated from high school and taken the University Entrance Examination.
I want to find out a part-time job this summer.
I'm 18 year old and have a good command of English,especial in terms of speaking and listening.
In fact,I once won the first prize in the English speech competition hold in our school.
Besides,I'm quite easy-going but therefore very popular among my classmates.
I sincerely hope you can give us a chance.I'm looking forward to your early reply.
1.for后面加a 考查冠词.look for a receptionist"寻找一名接待人员",此处a+单数可数名词表示泛指.
2.interesting改为interested 考查形容词及固定搭配.be interested in"对…感兴趣".
3.to改为for 考查介词及固定词组.apply to意思是"适用于",apply for意思是"申请",根据句意可知此处表示"申请这个职位",因此把to改为for.
4.had改为have 考查时态.本句要表达的意思是"我"已经高中毕业,应该用现在完成时,而过去完成时had done表示"过去的过去",因此把had改为have.
5.去掉out.考查动词用法及动词短语.find"找到",find out"找出,查明",根据语境可知此处表示找到,因此把out去掉.
6.year改为years 考查名词.此处要表达的意思是"我是一位十八岁的男生"year应该用复数形式years.
7.especial改为especially 考查副词.此处用来修饰前面的动词have a good command of,因此用especially"尤其,特别".
8.hold 改为held 考查非谓语动词作定语.此处用过去分词held的短语作后置定语修饰前面的competition,held表示被动和完成.
9.but改为and 考查连词.此处I'm quite easy-going 和后面的句子therefore very popular among my classmates不是转折关系而是顺承关系,因此把but改为and.
10.us改为me 考查人称代词.此处主语是I,因此后面要表达的是"给我一个机会",因此把us改为me.
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