假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词．修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：（1）每处错误及修改均仅限一词．（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分．One day a girl found a dead 
2019-05-29
假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文．
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：（1）每处错误及修改均仅限一词．
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分．
One day a girl found a dead rat in front of her door．This kind of thing happens a lot of in the city during winter，but she didn't pay much attention to it．However，the next day it was a dead bird on the doorstep of its house．She thought it was just some jokes playing by those naughty kids．But the same thing happens for a week!She started to get angrily．So she set up a hidden camera on the door，tried to find out the truth，which really gave her big surprise．The criminal was a cat!It left those dead body in front of her house every day at midnight．
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One day a girl found a dead rat in front of her door．This
kind of thing happens a lot of in the city during winter，but
she didn't pay much attention to it．However，the next day it
was a dead bird on the doorstep of its house．She thought it
wasjust some jokes playing by those naughty kids．But the same
thing happens for a week!She started to get angrily．So she set
up a hidden camera on the door，tried to find out the truth，which
really gave her∧big surprise．The criminal was a cat!It left those
dead body in front of her house every day at midnight．
详
1．去掉lot之后的of 考查固定词组 a lot of 意为：许多，通常用来修饰名词；a lot可用作副词词组，修饰动词，意为"十分，非常"，相当于very much；此处用来修饰动词happens，应使用a lot；故去掉lot之后的of．
2．but改为so 考查句意理解以及连词 本句的意思是：由于这种事情在城里的冬天会经常发生，所以她没太在意；此处表示因果关系，故用so．
3．it 改为there 考查there be 结构 本句的意思是：在她家门前的台阶上有一只死鸟；此处表达的是：在…地方有…，应使用there be 结构，故用there．
4．its改为her 考查人称代词的一致性 此处用来修饰名词house，指代的是：女孩的家，故用her．
5．playing改为played 考查过去分词 此处在句中作后置定语，修饰名词jokes，由于动词play与该名词是被动关系，故用过去分词played．
6．happens改为happened 考查时态 此处讲述的是在过去的一周里发生的事情，应使用一般过去时，故用happened．
7．angrily改为angry 考查形容词 此处用在系动词get 之后作表语，故用形容词angry．
8．tried改为trying 考查现在分词 此处在句中作结果状语，由于动词try与其逻辑主语she是主谓关系，故用现在分词trying．
9．big前加a 考查不定冠词 此处用来修饰单数名词surprise，表示泛指一件令人吃惊的事，故在big前加a．
10．body改为bodies 考查名词的单复数 此处指的是：那些死尸，由于body是可数名词，故用bodies．
One day a girl found a dead rat in front of her door．This
kind of thing happens a lot of in the city during winter，but
she didn't pay much attention to it．However，the next day it
was a dead bird on the doorstep of its house．She thought it
wasjust some jokes playing by those naughty kids．But the same
thing happens for a week!She started to get angrily．So she set
up a hidden camera on the door，tried to find out the truth，which
really gave her∧big surprise．The criminal was a cat!It left those
dead body in front of her house every day at midnight．
详
1．去掉lot之后的of 考查固定词组 a lot of 意为：许多，通常用来修饰名词；a lot可用作副词词组，修饰动词，意为"十分，非常"，相当于very much；此处用来修饰动词happens，应使用a lot；故去掉lot之后的of．
2．but改为so 考查句意理解以及连词 本句的意思是：由于这种事情在城里的冬天会经常发生，所以她没太在意；此处表示因果关系，故用so．
3．it 改为there 考查there be 结构 本句的意思是：在她家门前的台阶上有一只死鸟；此处表达的是：在…地方有…，应使用there be 结构，故用there．
4．its改为her 考查人称代词的一致性 此处用来修饰名词house，指代的是：女孩的家，故用her．
5．playing改为played 考查过去分词 此处在句中作后置定语，修饰名词jokes，由于动词play与该名词是被动关系，故用过去分词played．
6．happens改为happened 考查时态 此处讲述的是在过去的一周里发生的事情，应使用一般过去时，故用happened．
7．angrily改为angry 考查形容词 此处用在系动词get 之后作表语，故用形容词angry．
8．tried改为trying 考查现在分词 此处在句中作结果状语，由于动词try与其逻辑主语she是主谓关系，故用现在分词trying．
9．big前加a 考查不定冠词 此处用来修饰单数名词surprise，表示泛指一件令人吃惊的事，故在big前加a．
10．body改为bodies 考查名词的单复数 此处指的是：那些死尸，由于body是可数名词，故用bodies．