短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分． When I was a kid，my father and mother
2019-05-29
短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
When I was a kid，my father and mother were made me join a tennis club in the center of our city．Every day both my parent would take me to club after school．I played tennis，ate snacks and did my homework here．It was basically my second family．A woman whose name was Li Li，my first private coach，was as a mother to us．She not only taught me everything that I know about what to play tennis，but treats me well．She was kind or always trained me with great patient．In my heart，she was the best coach in our city．
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When I was a kid，my father and mother were made me join a tennis club in the center of our city．Every day both my parent would take me to∧club after school．I played tennis，ate snacks and did my homework here．It was basically my second family．A woman whose name was Li Li，my first private coach，was as a mother to us．She not only taught me everything that I know about what to play tennis，but treats me well．She was kind or always trained me with great patient．In my heart，she was the best coach in our city．
解析：
1．去掉were．考查谓语动词的语态．主语my father and mother和谓语动词 made 之间是主动关系，表示"爸爸妈妈让我参加了一个网球俱乐部"，所以去掉were．
2．parent改为parents．考查名词复数．根据修饰词both表示"两者"可知 用名词复数parents，表示"父母两人"．
3．club 前加the．考查定冠词．特指上文提到的俱乐部，用定冠词 the．
4．here 改为there．考查地点副词．代指the club应该用there，表示"那里"．
5．as改为like．考查介词．as表示"作为，是"；like表示"像"，教练不是我的妈妈，所以用like表示像．
6．us改为me．考查代词．根据下文She not only taught me everything 可知教练就像我的妈妈，所以用代词me．
7．what改为how．考查疑问词．根据本句表示"她教我怎样打网球"，所以what改为how．
8．treats 改为treated．考查谓语动词的时态．根据上文可知谓语动词用过去式treated．
9．or改为and．考查连词．She was kind表示她很和蔼； lways trained me with great patient 表示"她耐心的培训我"，所以两句之间是并列关系，所以or改为and．
10．patient改为patience．考查词性．with 后用名词patience，表示"耐心地"，相当于副词patiently．
When I was a kid，my father and mother were made me join a tennis club in the center of our city．Every day both my parent would take me to∧club after school．I played tennis，ate snacks and did my homework here．It was basically my second family．A woman whose name was Li Li，my first private coach，was as a mother to us．She not only taught me everything that I know about what to play tennis，but treats me well．She was kind or always trained me with great patient．In my heart，she was the best coach in our city．
解析：
1．去掉were．考查谓语动词的语态．主语my father and mother和谓语动词 made 之间是主动关系，表示"爸爸妈妈让我参加了一个网球俱乐部"，所以去掉were．
2．parent改为parents．考查名词复数．根据修饰词both表示"两者"可知 用名词复数parents，表示"父母两人"．
3．club 前加the．考查定冠词．特指上文提到的俱乐部，用定冠词 the．
4．here 改为there．考查地点副词．代指the club应该用there，表示"那里"．
5．as改为like．考查介词．as表示"作为，是"；like表示"像"，教练不是我的妈妈，所以用like表示像．
6．us改为me．考查代词．根据下文She not only taught me everything 可知教练就像我的妈妈，所以用代词me．
7．what改为how．考查疑问词．根据本句表示"她教我怎样打网球"，所以what改为how．
8．treats 改为treated．考查谓语动词的时态．根据上文可知谓语动词用过去式treated．
9．or改为and．考查连词．She was kind表示她很和蔼； lways trained me with great patient 表示"她耐心的培训我"，所以两句之间是并列关系，所以or改为and．
10．patient改为patience．考查词性．with 后用名词patience，表示"耐心地"，相当于副词patiently．