假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．In general，our houseparents （学生宿舍管理员） are annoyi
2019-05-29
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
In general，our houseparents （学生宿舍管理员） are annoying for boys students in dormitories．I didn't begin to like our houseparents until one night in last week．I was asleep when my alarm clock drops onto the floor and were broken into pieces．After the while，the houseparent on duty opened the door and rushed in．Instead blaming me，he asked me anxious what was going on．Before making sure I was OK，he asked me to go back to sleep and cleaned up itself．Since then，I have completely changed my opinion of our houseparents．They are like our parents，kept all of us safe．
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In general，our houseparents （学生宿舍管理员） are annoying for boys students in dormitories．I didn't begin to like our houseparents until one night in last week．I was asleep when my alarm clock drops onto the floor and were broken into pieces．After the while，the houseparent on duty opened the door and rushed in．Instead∧blaming me，he asked me anxious what was going on．Before making sure I was OK，he asked me to go back to sleep and cleaned up itself．Since then，I have completely changed my opinion of our houseparents．They are like our parents，kept all of us safe．
详
1．boys改为boy 考查名词．名词作定语时用单数形式．
2．去掉in 考查介词．last week作时间状语时前面不加介词．
3．drops改为dropped 考查动词时态．全文讲述的是已发生的事情，要用一般过去时态．
4．were改为was 考查主谓一致．broken into的主语my alarm clock是单数，助动词应用单数was．
5．the改为a 考查冠词．此处houseparent表示泛指，用不定冠词a．
6．加of 考查词语用法．instead是副词，意为"替代，顶替"，instead of是介词，意为"而不是…"，此处应是：而不是…．
7．anxious改为anxiously 考查副词．ask是动词，要用副词修饰，a形容词nxious的副词是anxiously．
8．Before改为After 考查连词．根据句意：在确信我没事后．用连词after．
9．itself改为himself 考查代词．himself与主语he一致．
10．kept改为keeping 考查现在分词．they与keep之间是主谓关系，用现在分词短语作伴随状语．
In general，our houseparents （学生宿舍管理员） are annoying for boys students in dormitories．I didn't begin to like our houseparents until one night in last week．I was asleep when my alarm clock drops onto the floor and were broken into pieces．After the while，the houseparent on duty opened the door and rushed in．Instead∧blaming me，he asked me anxious what was going on．Before making sure I was OK，he asked me to go back to sleep and cleaned up itself．Since then，I have completely changed my opinion of our houseparents．They are like our parents，kept all of us safe．
详
1．boys改为boy 考查名词．名词作定语时用单数形式．
2．去掉in 考查介词．last week作时间状语时前面不加介词．
3．drops改为dropped 考查动词时态．全文讲述的是已发生的事情，要用一般过去时态．
4．were改为was 考查主谓一致．broken into的主语my alarm clock是单数，助动词应用单数was．
5．the改为a 考查冠词．此处houseparent表示泛指，用不定冠词a．
6．加of 考查词语用法．instead是副词，意为"替代，顶替"，instead of是介词，意为"而不是…"，此处应是：而不是…．
7．anxious改为anxiously 考查副词．ask是动词，要用副词修饰，a形容词nxious的副词是anxiously．
8．Before改为After 考查连词．根据句意：在确信我没事后．用连词after．
9．itself改为himself 考查代词．himself与主语he一致．
10．kept改为keeping 考查现在分词．they与keep之间是主谓关系，用现在分词短语作伴随状语．