短文改错.假短文改错. 假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉.增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在该词下面写出该加的词.修改：在错的词下划一横线,在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词. &

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短文改错.
假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文.
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在该词下面写出该加的词.
修改：在错的词下划一横线,在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词.
2、只允许修改10处,多者（从11处起）不计分.

     I am writing to ask for whether you are able to do me a favor.I want to have a pen friend,hopefully
a girl in the early twenties,and with interests similarly to mine.In my mind,he is someone interested in
traveling,swimming,and playing table tennis.Besides,it will be better for her to have a pet dog as I have
been kept one at home for some time.With such pen friend,I hope I can share with her my experiences
in traveling,taking care pets,or whichever we have in common.I believed I will improve my English by
doing so and learning more about her country.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
     Best regards,
                                                                                                                                           Li Hua
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a girl in the early twenties, and with interests similarly to mine. In my mind, he is someone interested in
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traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Besides, it will be better for her to have a pet dog as I have
been kept one at home for some time. With such∧pen friend, I hope I can share with her my experiences
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in traveling, taking care∧pets, or whichever we have in common. I believed I will improve my English by
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doing so and learning more about her country. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
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     Best regards,                                                                                                                                            Li Hua