假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处，每处仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．Last summer，I visited Silver Beach with my fa
2019-05-29
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处，每处仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Last summer，I visited Silver Beach with my family in the first time．When we arrived，we saw a hundreds of people lying on the beach，enjoyed the sunshine．We were a bit disappointing as we hadn't realized that it was going to so crowded．We searched for fifteen minutes before we actual found a spot near the water to sit down．We put our things down and go for a swim．The water was such refreshing that we swam for over an hour．After that，we went to the only bar on the beach for a snack．Much to our surprises，when we got back to our spot，all of our things was wet．While we were at the bar，the tide came in．
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Last summer，I visited Silver Beach with my family in the first time．When we arrived，we saw a hundreds of people lying on the beach，enjoyed the sunshine．We were a bit disappointing as we hadn't realized that it was going to∧so crowded．We searched for fifteen minutes before we actual found a spot near the water to sit down．We put our things down and go for a swim．The water was such refreshing that we swam for over an hour．After that，we went to the only bar on the beach for a snack．Much to our surprises，when we got back to our spot，all of our things was wet．While we were at the bar，the tide came in．
详
1． in 改为for 考察介词．此处为一固定短语，for the first time 意为第一次．
2． a hundreds of people中去掉a 考察冠词．hundreds of people意为上百个人，a 在此处多于．
3．enjoyed 改为enjoying 考察非谓语．enjoy与people之间是主动关系，所以用现在分词表示伴随状况．
4．disappointing 改为disappointed 考察形容词．用来形容人的形容词一般用ed结尾的，表示感到失望．
5．was going to后面加be 考察固定短语，be going to do 意为打算…crowded为形容词，所以前面要用be．
6．actual改为actually 考察副词．修饰动词found需用副词形式．
7．go改为went 考察时态． 全文叙述的是去年夏天的情况，所以用一般过去式．
8．such改为so 考察固定短语． 根据短语so+adj+that 可知此处用so．
9．surprises改为surprise 考察名词． to one's surprise为固定短语，意为让某人吃惊的是．
10．was改为were 考察主谓一致． 句子的主语为all of our things 是复数形式，需用were．
Last summer，I visited Silver Beach with my family in the first time．When we arrived，we saw a hundreds of people lying on the beach，enjoyed the sunshine．We were a bit disappointing as we hadn't realized that it was going to∧so crowded．We searched for fifteen minutes before we actual found a spot near the water to sit down．We put our things down and go for a swim．The water was such refreshing that we swam for over an hour．After that，we went to the only bar on the beach for a snack．Much to our surprises，when we got back to our spot，all of our things was wet．While we were at the bar，the tide came in．
详
1． in 改为for 考察介词．此处为一固定短语，for the first time 意为第一次．
2． a hundreds of people中去掉a 考察冠词．hundreds of people意为上百个人，a 在此处多于．
3．enjoyed 改为enjoying 考察非谓语．enjoy与people之间是主动关系，所以用现在分词表示伴随状况．
4．disappointing 改为disappointed 考察形容词．用来形容人的形容词一般用ed结尾的，表示感到失望．
5．was going to后面加be 考察固定短语，be going to do 意为打算…crowded为形容词，所以前面要用be．
6．actual改为actually 考察副词．修饰动词found需用副词形式．
7．go改为went 考察时态． 全文叙述的是去年夏天的情况，所以用一般过去式．
8．such改为so 考察固定短语． 根据短语so+adj+that 可知此处用so．
9．surprises改为surprise 考察名词． to one's surprise为固定短语，意为让某人吃惊的是．
10．was改为were 考察主谓一致． 句子的主语为all of our things 是复数形式，需用were．