假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．It was cold and rainy．Stood at an
2019-05-29
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共
有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
It was cold and rainy．Stood at an uncovered bus stop，an old man didn't have a hat and an umbrella．Without thinking I stopped and give him the umbrella I carried with I．As a result，I was caught in a heavy rain．When I got to school，I became complete wet．
To my great happiness，all of my classmate felt admiration for me at the moment they knew about my kind act．It was not until then when I realized giving was joyful than I had thought．I will try my best to help those who are in need in the future．
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It was cold and rainy．Stood at an uncovered bus stop，an old man didn't have a hat and an umbrella．Without thinking I stopped and give him the umbrella I carried with I．As a result，I was caught in a heavy rain．When I got to school，I became complete wet．
To my great happiness，all of my classmate felt admiration for me at the moment they knew about my kind act．It was not until then when I realized giving was∧joyful than I had thought．I will try my best to help those who are in need in the future．
详
1．Stood改为Standing 考查现在分词．an old man与stand之间是主谓关系，用现在分词短语Standing at an uncovered bus stop作伴随状语．
2．and改为or 考查连词．or意为"（用于否定句，提出两种或多种事物时）也不"．
3．give改为gave 考查动词时态．全文讲述的是已发生的事情，用一般过去时态．
4．I改为me 考查代词．with是介词，其后接宾格代词me作宾语．
5．a改为the 考查冠词．此处the heavy rain表示特指．
6．complete改为completely 考查副词．wet是形容词，要用副词修饰，形容词complete的副词是completely．
7．classmate改为classmates 考查名词．one of意为"…之一"，后接名词复数形式．
8．去掉at 考查词语用法．the moment是连词，意为"一…就…"，其前不可加介词at，要去掉．
9．when改为that 考查强调句．英语强调句型：It is/was+被强调部分（通常是主语、宾语或状语）+that/who（当强调主语且主语指人）+其他部分．
10．加more 考查形容词比较级．根据句中than，要用形容词比较级，joyful是多音节词，其前加more构成比较级．
It was cold and rainy．Stood at an uncovered bus stop，an old man didn't have a hat and an umbrella．Without thinking I stopped and give him the umbrella I carried with I．As a result，I was caught in a heavy rain．When I got to school，I became complete wet．
To my great happiness，all of my classmate felt admiration for me at the moment they knew about my kind act．It was not until then when I realized giving was∧joyful than I had thought．I will try my best to help those who are in need in the future．
详
1．Stood改为Standing 考查现在分词．an old man与stand之间是主谓关系，用现在分词短语Standing at an uncovered bus stop作伴随状语．
2．and改为or 考查连词．or意为"（用于否定句，提出两种或多种事物时）也不"．
3．give改为gave 考查动词时态．全文讲述的是已发生的事情，用一般过去时态．
4．I改为me 考查代词．with是介词，其后接宾格代词me作宾语．
5．a改为the 考查冠词．此处the heavy rain表示特指．
6．complete改为completely 考查副词．wet是形容词，要用副词修饰，形容词complete的副词是completely．
7．classmate改为classmates 考查名词．one of意为"…之一"，后接名词复数形式．
8．去掉at 考查词语用法．the moment是连词，意为"一…就…"，其前不可加介词at，要去掉．
9．when改为that 考查强调句．英语强调句型：It is/was+被强调部分（通常是主语、宾语或状语）+that/who（当强调主语且主语指人）+其他部分．
10．加more 考查形容词比较级．根据句中than，要用形容词比较级，joyful是多音节词，其前加more构成比较级．