假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．In the summer holiday following my&
2019-05-29
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday，I took driving lessons．I still remember how hard first day was．Before getting into the car，I thought I had learned the instructor's orders，so once I started the car，my mind goes blank．I forgot what he had said to me altogether．The instructor kept repeating the word，"Speed up!""Slow down!""Turning left!"I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left．A few minutes late，the instructor asked me to stop the car．It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road．
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In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday，I took driving lessons．I still remember how hard∧first day was．Before getting into the car，I thought I had learned the instructor's orders，so once I started the car，my mind goes blank．I forgot what he had said to me altogether．The instructor kept repeating the word，"Speed up!""Slow down!""Turning left!"I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left．A few minutes late，the instructor asked me to stop the car．It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road．
详
1．eighteen改为eighteenth 考查数词．此处应是第十八个生日，用序数词．
2．how hard后加the或my 考查冠词或代词．序数词前用定冠词the．或我学车的第一天，用形容词性物主代词．
3．so改为but/yet 考查连词．前后两个单句表示转折关系，用连词but/yet．
4．goes改为went 考查动词时态． 全文讲述的是已发生的事情，用一般过去时．
5．word改为words 考查名词复数．word的基本意思是"单词"，指语言中能独立存在的最小表意单位，也可指"（说的）话，话语，言语，谈话"等，是可数名词，此时要用复数形式．
6．Turning改为Turn 考查祈使句．"Speed up!""Slow down!""Turn left!"这些属于祈使句，要用动词原形．
7．去掉much 考查固定搭配．so…that…意为"如此/这么…以致于…"，句型中的so是副词，常常用来修饰形容词或副词，常用句型为：主语+谓语+so+adj．/adv．+that从句．已有副词so，much是多余的，要去掉．
8．late改为later 考查副词．later用于一段具体时间之后，表示从过去或将来算起的多长时间以后，但通常不指从现在算起的多久以后．
9．suddenly改为sudden 考查形容词．stop是名词，要用形容词修饰．
10．on改为of 考查介词．in the middle of意为"正在…当中； 在…的中部"，是固定搭配．
In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday，I took driving lessons．I still remember how hard∧first day was．Before getting into the car，I thought I had learned the instructor's orders，so once I started the car，my mind goes blank．I forgot what he had said to me altogether．The instructor kept repeating the word，"Speed up!""Slow down!""Turning left!"I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left．A few minutes late，the instructor asked me to stop the car．It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road．
详
1．eighteen改为eighteenth 考查数词．此处应是第十八个生日，用序数词．
2．how hard后加the或my 考查冠词或代词．序数词前用定冠词the．或我学车的第一天，用形容词性物主代词．
3．so改为but/yet 考查连词．前后两个单句表示转折关系，用连词but/yet．
4．goes改为went 考查动词时态． 全文讲述的是已发生的事情，用一般过去时．
5．word改为words 考查名词复数．word的基本意思是"单词"，指语言中能独立存在的最小表意单位，也可指"（说的）话，话语，言语，谈话"等，是可数名词，此时要用复数形式．
6．Turning改为Turn 考查祈使句．"Speed up!""Slow down!""Turn left!"这些属于祈使句，要用动词原形．
7．去掉much 考查固定搭配．so…that…意为"如此/这么…以致于…"，句型中的so是副词，常常用来修饰形容词或副词，常用句型为：主语+谓语+so+adj．/adv．+that从句．已有副词so，much是多余的，要去掉．
8．late改为later 考查副词．later用于一段具体时间之后，表示从过去或将来算起的多长时间以后，但通常不指从现在算起的多久以后．
9．suddenly改为sudden 考查形容词．stop是名词，要用形容词修饰．
10．on改为of 考查介词．in the middle of意为"正在…当中； 在…的中部"，是固定搭配．