I was very happy because I go kite flying with my friends yesterday．It was sun，and when
the wind came，we all went to the park．My father bought the kites to us．When we arrived∧the
park，we took out our kites．My was a dragon and my two friend both had birds．I tried to fly my
kite，and I couldn't．So I ran the faster and faster，and then my kite finally flew．A few minutes
later，my friends'kites was also flying．Seeing our kites flying，we all felt very excitedly．
详
1．go改为went 考查动词时态．根据句中时间状语yesterday表示过去，用一般过去时态．
2．sun改为sunny  考查形容词．was后接形容词作表语，名词sun的形容词是sunny．
3．to改为for 考查介词．buy sth．for sb．意为"给某人买某物"，用介词for．
4．加at 考查词语用法．arrive是不及物动词，后接小地方用介词at，大地方用介词in．
5．My改为Mine 考查代词．分析句子结构，句中缺少主语，名词性物主代词mine作主语，my是形容词性物 主代词，只能作定语．
6．friend改为friends 考查名词．friend是可数名词，其前有数词two修饰时用复数形式．
7．and改为but 考查连词．前后两个单句表示转折关系，而非并列关系，用连词but．
8．去掉the 考查冠词．faster是副词比较级，其前不加定冠词the．
9．was改为were 考查主谓一致．主语kites是复数，谓语动词也应用复数were．
10．excitedly改为excited 考查形容词．feel是连系动词，后接形容词作表语．形容词化的过去分词作表语，多半用来表示人物所处的心理状态或情感变化，其主语多半是人． I was very happy because I go kite flying with my friends yesterday．It was sun，and when
the wind came，we all went to the park．My father bought the kites to us．When we arrived∧the
park，we took out our kites．My was a dragon and my two friend both had birds．I tried to fly my
kite，and I couldn't．So I ran the faster and faster，and then my kite finally flew．A few minutes
later，my friends'kites was also flying．Seeing our kites flying，we all felt very excitedly．
详
1．go改为went 考查动词时态．根据句中时间状语yesterday表示过去，用一般过去时态．
2．sun改为sunny  考查形容词．was后接形容词作表语，名词sun的形容词是sunny．
3．to改为for 考查介词．buy sth．for sb．意为"给某人买某物"，用介词for．
4．加at 考查词语用法．arrive是不及物动词，后接小地方用介词at，大地方用介词in．
5．My改为Mine 考查代词．分析句子结构，句中缺少主语，名词性物主代词mine作主语，my是形容词性物 主代词，只能作定语．
6．friend改为friends 考查名词．friend是可数名词，其前有数词two修饰时用复数形式．
7．and改为but 考查连词．前后两个单句表示转折关系，而非并列关系，用连词but．
8．去掉the 考查冠词．faster是副词比较级，其前不加定冠词the．
9．was改为were 考查主谓一致．主语kites是复数，谓语动词也应用复数were．
10．excitedly改为excited 考查形容词．feel是连系动词，后接形容词作表语．形容词化的过去分词作表语，多半用来表示人物所处的心理状态或情感变化，其主语多半是人．