假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．Dear Ms Lee，I'm delighting to have you as my English te
2019-05-29
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Ms Lee，
I'm delighting to have you as my English teacher．
English has become a global language，so I'm convinced that learning English is of great useful．We should learn English well to better understand that happens around the world．
But my English is rather poor．One of my problems are that I often feel nervously when speaking in public．Besides，I feel difficult to learn words by heart．I really hope you call offer us more chances to speak with English．But I also hope you'll give me some advices on how to learn new words．I believe I can make many progress than ever with your help．
Thank you!
Li Hua．
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Dear Ms Lee，
I'm delighting to have you as my English teacher．
delighted
English has become a global language，so I'm convinced that learning English is of great useful．
use
We should learn English well to better understand that happens around the world．
what
But my English is rather poor．One of my problems are that I often feel nervously when speaking in public．
is nervous
Besides，I feel∧difficult to learn words by heart．I really hope you call offer us more chances to speak with English．
it 去掉
But I also hope you'll give me some advices on how to learn new words．I believe I can make many progress than ever with your help．
And advice more
Thank you!
Li Hua．
1．delighting-delighted 考查形容词形式．注意是人，应该用delighted，delighting是修饰物．
2．useful-use 考查名词．介词of后面应该用名词形式．
3．that-what 考查宾语从句．本句中含有宾语从句，从句中缺少主语．所以用what．
4．are-is 考查主谓一致．主语是one of my problems，谓语动词应该用第三人称单数．
5．nervously-nervous，考查系表结构．feel为系动词，后面应该用形容词作表语．
6．feel 后加it 考查形式宾语．feel后面不定式短语是feel的真正宾语，缺少形式宾语it．
7．去掉speak后面的with 考查介词搭配．speak表示说某种语言时是及物动词，不需要介词．
8．But-And 考查并列连词．前后之间是并列关系，所以用and．
9．advices-advice 考查名词单复数．advice是不可数名词，所以不能用复数形式．
10．many-more 考查比较级．后面有than，所以前面应该用比较级．
Dear Ms Lee，
I'm delighting to have you as my English teacher．
delighted
English has become a global language，so I'm convinced that learning English is of great useful．
use
We should learn English well to better understand that happens around the world．
what
But my English is rather poor．One of my problems are that I often feel nervously when speaking in public．
is nervous
Besides，I feel∧difficult to learn words by heart．I really hope you call offer us more chances to speak with English．
it 去掉
But I also hope you'll give me some advices on how to learn new words．I believe I can make many progress than ever with your help．
And advice more
Thank you!
Li Hua．
1．delighting-delighted 考查形容词形式．注意是人，应该用delighted，delighting是修饰物．
2．useful-use 考查名词．介词of后面应该用名词形式．
3．that-what 考查宾语从句．本句中含有宾语从句，从句中缺少主语．所以用what．
4．are-is 考查主谓一致．主语是one of my problems，谓语动词应该用第三人称单数．
5．nervously-nervous，考查系表结构．feel为系动词，后面应该用形容词作表语．
6．feel 后加it 考查形式宾语．feel后面不定式短语是feel的真正宾语，缺少形式宾语it．
7．去掉speak后面的with 考查介词搭配．speak表示说某种语言时是及物动词，不需要介词．
8．But-And 考查并列连词．前后之间是并列关系，所以用and．
9．advices-advice 考查名词单复数．advice是不可数名词，所以不能用复数形式．
10．many-more 考查比较级．后面有than，所以前面应该用比较级．