假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．A woman was taken to the hospital．While having an operation，
2019-05-29
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10
处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
A woman was taken to the hospital．While having an operation，she had a nearly
death experience．Seeing God，she asked how this was it．God said，"No，you had another
40years．"On recovery the women decided to have a plastic surgery．She had someone
change her hair color，thinking since she had so many time to live，she'd better make full
use from it．Finally she got out of the hospital．While crossing the street，she killed by an
ambulance speeded by．Arriving in the front of God，she demanded，"They said I had
another 40years!"God replied，"But I didn't recognize you．"
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A woman was taken to the hospital．While having an operation，she had a nearly
near
death experience．Seeing God，she asked how this was it．God said，"No，you had
if/whether have
another 40 years．"On recovery the womendecided to have a plastic surgery．She had
woman
someone change her hair color，thinking since she had so many time to live，she'd
much
better make full use fromit．Finally she got out of the hospital．While crossing the
of
street，she∧killed by an ambulance speeded by．Arriving in the front of God，
加was speeding 去掉
she demanded，"They said I had another 40 years!"God replied，"But I didn't
You
recognize you．"
1．nearly改为near．短语搭配，a near death experience濒临死亡的体验．
2．how改为if/whether．题干是宾语从句，句意表达是否，不是表示程度．
3．had改为have．直接引语中表示说话当时的情况，要用一般现在时态．
4．women改为woman．文章讲述的是一位女士，要用单数．
5．many改为much．题干修饰的是时间time，不可数名词，要用much来修饰．
6．from改为of．短语搭配，make full use of充分利用．
7．加was．句意表达的是被动，要加be动词．
8．speeded改为speeding．题干中speed是作ambulance的后置定语，表达主动关系，要用现在分词．
9．the去掉．in front of是外部的前面，in the front of是内部的前面．
10．they改为you．逻辑错误，句意是用来指代上帝，应该是you．
A woman was taken to the hospital．While having an operation，she had a nearly
near
death experience．Seeing God，she asked how this was it．God said，"No，you had
if/whether have
another 40 years．"On recovery the womendecided to have a plastic surgery．She had
woman
someone change her hair color，thinking since she had so many time to live，she'd
much
better make full use fromit．Finally she got out of the hospital．While crossing the
of
street，she∧killed by an ambulance speeded by．Arriving in the front of God，
加was speeding 去掉
she demanded，"They said I had another 40 years!"God replied，"But I didn't
You
recognize you．"
1．nearly改为near．短语搭配，a near death experience濒临死亡的体验．
2．how改为if/whether．题干是宾语从句，句意表达是否，不是表示程度．
3．had改为have．直接引语中表示说话当时的情况，要用一般现在时态．
4．women改为woman．文章讲述的是一位女士，要用单数．
5．many改为much．题干修饰的是时间time，不可数名词，要用much来修饰．
6．from改为of．短语搭配，make full use of充分利用．
7．加was．句意表达的是被动，要加be动词．
8．speeded改为speeding．题干中speed是作ambulance的后置定语，表达主动关系，要用现在分词．
9．the去掉．in front of是外部的前面，in the front of是内部的前面．
10．they改为you．逻辑错误，句意是用来指代上帝，应该是you．