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短文改错     假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.Dear Sir,   &nbs

2019-05-29

短文改错
     假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共
有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.

Dear Sir,
     How are you? As a exchange student,I am writing to tell you I would prefer to move into a single
room in next term,as I find it inconvenient to share a room with others. My roommate often held parties
at night, made much noise. Besides, his friends are always visiting him, that disturb me a lot. So I hope
to draw your attentions to this problem. If you think in my position,I am sure he will agree that the only
solution for me is get a room of my own,one not in the same building but as near to the school campus
as possible. I would be gratefully if you could do me the favor.
Best wishes.
                                                                  Yours sincerely,
                                                                        Li Ming
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Dear Sir,
     How are you? As a exchange student,I am writing to tell you I would prefer to move into a
                             1. an
single room in next term, as I find it inconvenient to share a room with others. My roommate often
                  2. 去掉
held parties at night, made much noise. Besides, his friends are always visiting him, that disturb me
3. holds                4. making                                                                                 5.which 6.disturbs
a lot. So I hope to draw your attentions to this problem. If you think in my position,I am sure he 
                                            7.  attention                                                                           8. you
will agree that the only solution for me is∧ get a room of my own,one not in the same building but as
                                                            9. to
near to the school campus as possible. I would be gratefully if you could do me the favor.
                                                                         10. grateful
     Best wishes.
                                                    Yours sincerely,
                                                            Li Ming


Dear Sir,
     How are you? As a exchange student,I am writing to tell you I would prefer to move into a
                             1. an
single room in next term, as I find it inconvenient to share a room with others. My roommate often
                  2. 去掉
held parties at night, made much noise. Besides, his friends are always visiting him, that disturb me
3. holds                4. making                                                                                 5.which 6.disturbs
a lot. So I hope to draw your attentions to this problem. If you think in my position,I am sure he 
                                            7.  attention                                                                           8. you
will agree that the only solution for me is∧ get a room of my own,one not in the same building but as
                                                            9. to
near to the school campus as possible. I would be gratefully if you could do me the favor.
                                                                         10. grateful
     Best wishes.
                                                    Yours sincerely,
                                                            Li Ming


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